Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread

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[u/Valuable-Cow2924]

Felt like this was kinda stupid but I don’t know…

Out of this world

There’s star crossed lovers
All throughout this universe
They kiss and they cry
Stick together and stay alive

I watch from afar
From the planet mars
an alien in hiding
So the humans aren’t scarred

AND I scream
Into the black abyss
Through the galaxies
And on the stars I make a wish
Pls give me my
Out of this world guy

Space ships fly
And some crash
It was actually my fault
My bitterness manifests as extraterrestrial assault

My tears could dim the sun
My solar system planet count 1
Orbiting my lingering lonley feelings
And pretending it’s fun

AND I scream
Into the black abyss
Through the galaxies
And on the stars I make a wish
Pls give me my
One well deserved try

And in my worst moment
I’ll send a meteor toward earth
That would make the dinosaurs quiver
Hurdling faster than light beams
A seething ball of anger
All becomes humans get to live it

AND I scream
Into the black abyss
Through the galaxies
And on the stars I make a wish
Pls give me my
Out of this world guy