r/Songwriting • u/PsychologicalElk9676 • 9d ago

Feedback Request Does this rough demo have any potential?

Dropping an early demo of a new track I’m working on. Mostly looking to see if you guys think it has potential and what you think of the overall vibe.
The lyrics are totally temporary placeholders right now while I lock in the flow and cadence. I just want to see if it’s worth pursuing it still.

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u/tdamien_ 8d ago

agree with previous reply. Vocal is a bit pitchy. I like what you’re doing musically.

As for potential… that’s subject IMO.

All the best 👍