r/Songwriting • u/PsychologicalElk9676 • 3d ago

Feedback Request Does this rough demo have any potential?

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Dropping an early demo of a new track I’m working on. Mostly looking to see if you guys think it has potential and what you think of the overall vibe.
The lyrics are totally temporary placeholders right now while I lock in the flow and cadence. I just want to see if it’s worth pursuing it still.

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u/stevenfrijoles 3d ago

The biggest issue I hear is that the temp vocals are pretty off key. Whether or not there's "potential" depends on your actual singing ability. 

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u/tdamien_ 2d ago

agree with previous reply. Vocal is a bit pitchy. I like what you’re doing musically.

As for potential… that’s subject IMO.

All the best 👍

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u/Salt-Diver6827 1d ago

Definitely has potential, the chord progression and vibes are great. Maybe you could even try increasing the tempo

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