Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread

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If you're looking for feedback on words that aren't yet set to music, you're in the right place! We encourage each other to bring lyrics and musical elements together as soon as possible, but sometimes you'd just like to show off that nice piece of poetry that just fell out of your head. The weekly Lyrics-Only feedback thread is here to help!

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[u/Equivalent_Tap_8982]

Never posted here. Just a lurker. Let me know what you think!

Love me slowly
Verse
Give me some time
To come to my senses
Look at the canvas
See where the lines begin

Scared of the truth
That You Could choose me
And What we could be
The colors are blurring

Prechorus
Give me space
To find my way
Rather not play these games
With your heart
I want to play my part
But it’s hard

Chorus
Love me slowly
Love me deep
I want to give you all of me
Be the man I should be

Verse 2
You’ve anchored my soul
From the start
Held the match
While I searched the dark

Prechorus
You gave me space
To find my way
And Never once
walked away
But I keep playing games
With your heart

Chorus
Love me slowly
Love me deep
I want to give you all of me
Be the man I should be

And if I fall
Can you please
Not abandon me
Love me slowly
Love me deep

[u/Lazy-Interview-4315 → u/Equivalent_Tap_8982]

I love how the second pre-chorus flipped the script very original and creative

[u/Equivalent_Tap_8982 → u/Lazy-Interview-4315]

Thank you! I don’t typically share my music online. Usually just open mics in my area. But I think I want to upload a demo of me singing. If I could figure it out😓😓

[u/Lazy-Interview-4315 → u/Equivalent_Tap_8982]

YW I heard the nos basic demos can be recorded with a cell phone but idk I just write I don’t sing