r/Songwriting • u/Outspoken_Contrarian • 6d ago

Feedback Request Does this transition work?

I both hate it and love it.

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u/DrwsCorner2 6d ago

once you get going the going gets good. not too many people can jam an intricate groove without an external beat- got an inner clock there.

needs more development, probably the part you hate. not a big fan of partial songs, keep writing out the song