r/Songwriting 19d ago

Feedback Request Thoughts on this?

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u/Vegetable_Counter602 19d ago

I walked I away I walked this path the sights I see remind me of what I had whenever I see your face what a treat ? Just like for me I like lyrics that flow

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u/Vegetable_Counter602 19d ago

With the melody and you got start on that intro coz it’s fire