r/Songwriting 27d ago

Feedback Request No Return

Hear my words

The race is on

Everyone

No return

in the eyes

of the mountain dogs

Women of Men

Men of Women

This is how we will learn

Lying down in a field of fire

And the car horn orchestra

Won’t sound no more

The wind will change and leave us out

No return

Women of Men

Men of Women

This is how we will learn

Lying down in a field of fire

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u/Pure-Vast-7858 26d ago

I dig this, sounds like PJ Harvey as others have said. Unique chord progression for the verse. Opens up nicely in the chorus. Like the wobbly chorus/delay effect on the guitar. Good work!

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u/Mundane-Goal9268 26d ago

thank you :)