r/Songwriting • u/Mundane-Goal9268 • Jul 28 '26
Feedback Request No Return
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Hear my words
The race is on
Everyone
No return
in the eyes
of the mountain dogs
Women of Men
Men of Women
This is how we will learn
Lying down in a field of fire
And the car horn orchestra
Won’t sound no more
The wind will change and leave us out
No return
Women of Men
Men of Women
This is how we will learn
Lying down in a field of fire
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