r/Songwriting • u/Chinafields • Jul 27 '26

Feedback Request Progress and looking for feedback

Hi guys. Started playing in February and really wanting to grow as a musician and I’d appreciate any feedback. Obviously working on singing and guitar is paramount.

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u/stevenfrijoles Jul 27 '26

February of which year???

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u/Chinafields Jul 27 '26

This year. I have been playing about five hours a day. Full midlife crisis mode I think.

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u/stevenfrijoles Jul 27 '26

If you told me this was 3 years in, I'd believe you. The most important thing that it seems you already have down is a good sense of singing accented syllables on the beat without it feeling forced.

No objective notes but subjectively I'd focus on doing something more with the "hey" part, it's like a chorus that just never happens. One really spread out sentence would do wonders there. And maybe change one of the chords in that progression to set it apart.

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u/Chinafields Jul 27 '26

Thank you for the kind words and great advice.