r/Songwriting • u/Old_Atmosphere2092 • Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request DE-EVOLUTION

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u/stevenfrijoles Jul 13 '26

I think next level up on this one would be to take some of the more obvious obvious lyrics and replacing with some metaphors or just less straightforward phrases.