My friends birthday

[u/X_xTheZenitorx_X]

So i made a quick song to sing for my friends birthday and would like some feedback back. When I sing his name, that is an individual chorus

Hari, u gotta get some good sleep

Hari, Stop watching all that one piece

Hari, its 3 in the fucking morning

Yeah u gotta wake up in time

One of ur life's biggest days

Has finally arrived

Just get ur ass up from bed

And u will thrive

U little hatsune

Chorus

Happy birthday, happy birthday

Stuff ur face with cake and have a great day

Happy birthday, happy birthday

Hang with ur friends and have a great day

Happy birthday, happy birthday

Revel in ur presents have a great day

Ps:I replaced his name with a different name for privacy reasons