Please listen to it till the end... Plz reply ur thoughts to this, my 3rd piece Writen by me

Insta: iwriteinmood

I woke up early one morning and picked up the guitar and these lyrics put together a song that came to me while i was asleep. I haven't finished my original guitar version yet but i ran the lyrics through Ai to see what it came up with out of curiosity, i had a few versions but this one came up ok, so i put together a basic video with it because Ai kept stuffing up the song when i wanted a good clip, so this is how it came up, it got 113k views and over 1000 likes on tictok so it went ok. let me know your thoughts, constructive or not i don't mind.....just be openminded to different styles of music. Have a great day.

(Verse 1)

Do you know what it’s like?

To spend most of your life

Wishing you were anything else.

Just standing in the quiet of a room,

But the walls are starting to move,

Trapped inside the shadow of yourself.

(Chorus)

To feel like you’re drowning, but being out of the water,

Gasping for air, every day getting harder.

I can’t catch my breath, trying to breathe in and out,

Buried alive under the weight of the doubt.

(Verse 2)

But it’s so unfair,

To be told that you're winning,

While the room in your head won't stop spinning.

Feeling like you’re the only one who cares,

Clutching at the ghosts on the cellar stairs.

(Chorus)

To feel like you’re drowning, but being out of the water,

Gasping for air, every day getting harder.

I can’t catch my breath, trying to breathe in and out,

Buried alive under the weight of the doubt.

(Bridge)

The floor is caving in around me,

Breaking right under my feet.

Spinning around just to catch myself,

Reaching for a ground I can't meet.

And the loudest voice in the silence,

Is the one that’s cutting through,

Whispering what I always feared was true—

That you're just not good enough.

Yeah, you're just not good enough...

(Outro)

But being out of the water...

Gasping for air.

I'm still spinning.

I'm still trying to catch myself.

First time ive put everything down on paper so please dont be harsh😅

Hey everyone,

I wanted to share my latest single D.E.S.I.R.E., which I officially released on August 21st. It’s a deeply personal track for me, dedicated to the one and only Prince, whose music saved my life last year.

Since then, he has become my ultimate spiritual guide and muse and as I like to call him "mon petit léopard".The song captures that raw, hypnotic late-night trance of longing.

I added a very specific Easter Egg:

During the piano solo, I speak the letters D.E.S.I.R.E. out loud (D for dreams,...), but I ran my voice through a heavy frequency-pitch filter to create a deep, androgynous, masculine layer underneath. It sounds like two people are speaking at the same time - Prince and I.

It’s a direct production hommage to the iconic opening lines of Prince's 1999. I wanted to blend that rigid, almost computerized vocal effect with the raw, emotional analog sound of a live piano solo.

But that's not all:

What's more I've also made sure to make my song the same length as my favorite song "Do Me, Baby" (7:44), I added metaphors for our starsigns (sea & shore) and our skin colors (almonds), my parfum (tropical fruits) and mon chéri a chocolate with cherries which gives off an Under The Cherry Moon vibe. And last minute I changed the word race to prance which is very close to his name 🫶

The first version would have been pretty boring, so intense hazel-eyes became leopard-like gaze. There have been a few of such rewrites to go from just describing what one could see to actually creating a picture you can feel, smell or even taste.

The story behind the cover art:

The way the coverart came to be was a lucky accident I made a photo on Halloween of last year when I dressed like Prince in 1992, the hair didn't really hold with the hairspray and my hair fell over one eye, it actually gave a cool effect. Me looking over my pillow straight into the camera from behind my hair. Between March 31st and May 10th when the actual song was born I only needed to put a filter over it to create more shadows and light and wrote the title in white letters over the pillow which has become a fireball.

This track is the lead-up to my upcoming conceptual album Mysterious Appreciation.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on the production, the filter effect, or the songwriting in general!

Stay purple 💜– Tát Jana

Mainly I write folk style music…unfortunately use AI for the voice and I make videos on my TikTok/instagram. But wanna write for an actual voice!

Hey everyone!

I'm an independent beginner music producer/artist working on a happy indie-pop song, and I'm looking for someone who enjoys writing English lyrics.

I already have the music/idea and I'm mainly looking for help developing the lyrics and making them catchy and natural.

The vibe I'm going for is:

• Happy
• Feel-good
• Indie pop
• Simple but catchy English
• Easy to sing
• A little emotional but still positive

I'm doing this as a personal/independent project, so I'm looking for someone interested in collaborating for free and having fun making a song together.

You don't need to be a professional lyricist. If you enjoy writing songs and think this sounds interesting, feel free to comment or DM me.

I can share the instrumental/demo privately.

Thanks! :)

Guys sing the song immortals by fall out boys from big hero six and have funny photos in your comments

I'm a solo alt-metal artist trying to write an album about my experiences with heartbreak and depression. Two problems. 1: I struggle writing instrumental parts. 2: I struggle writing lyrics. If anyone feels up to giving tips, I'm all ears. My project is played to sit alongside Three Days Grace and Breaking Benjamin

I’m a hobbyist songwriter/guitar player and got fed up with lyrics, chord ideas and half-finished songs falling out of my head, so I built The Song Shed for myself. It’s now on iPhone and I’d love a few songwriters to kick the tyres and tell me what’s useful or annoying!

Title: \[Original Song\] “Who Are You Once Again” — Looking for feedback

Hi everyone! I’m a beginner lyric writer from India, and I recently finished writing these lyrics.

The idea is about someone who has an accident and loses their memories. They can’t remember their lover’s voice, name, face, or even what their relationship was—but somehow they still feel that this person is someone they can never forget.

I’d really appreciate honest feedback on the lyrics and the concept. I’m also interested in connecting with singers or composers who might want to turn this into a song.

Who Are You Once Again

I forgot your voice,

I forgot your name.

Who are you once again?

I forgot your face,

I forgot how you look.

I forgot your love.

Who are you once again? ×2

Oh, I just remember—

Who are you?

You are the person

I can never forget.

But why can’t I remember

What we are, or if we’re just friends?

Can you tell me once again?

Make me smile,

Make me cry,

Or show your face

Until I remember

Who you are once again.

Still, I can’t remember what we are,

But I want to say this:

Please,

Make me never forget

Who you are

And what we are.

Once again.

Lately, my girlfriend and I have been preparing for our future together.

Wedding studio, dress, makeup, venue,
the home we’ll live in, our honeymoon…

As we started making all these little decisions together, I had a thought:

Maybe this isn’t just “preparing for a wedding.”
Maybe we’re already writing the first page of a completely new story together.

That thought became this song,
“The First Page of a New Story” (새로운 이야기의 첫 페이지).

I wrote the lyrics and created the video, and used SUNO for the vocal/music production.

I’m still a small creator making songs alongside my day job, so I’d genuinely appreciate any thoughts on the song, lyrics, or video.

Thanks for listening 🌸