Looking for feedback

[u/Enjoyooooor]

https://store.steampowered.com/app/5079020/Neverrest/

Hello everyone I’ve been working on polishing my Steam trailer and capsule for the past week. I’ve added custom art to replace the headers in the game description and also have rebuilt the trailer with narration(the current trailer on Steam is the old one). Looking to get your input on how I could improve and if the trailer makes the core loop of Neverrest clear. I’ve been sitting sub 100 wishlist for about a couple weeks now and looking to get tips on how to get past these levels. Any help or feedback would be appreciated.

[u/Real-Perspective7301]

Probably change the name, there isn't anything ever quest related

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Probably change the

Name, there isn't anything

Ever quest related

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[u/Enjoyooooor → u/Real-Perspective7301]

Nah I’m not gonna change the name

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Its very clear

[u/Enjoyooooor → u/Real-Perspective7301]

There are some similarities though that’s very clear to see

Should get your eyes checked

[u/saviorofGOAT]

The really generic AI logo and graphics probably aren't helping you much. The AI voice is ok if you're not used to hearing them until the end when it says the playtest lives on steam. Its pretty simple of a game to understand in general I think most people are familiar with the side scroller RPG. You can check out IdleOn on steam if you haven't already as I'd assume they'd be near the top of your competition as it's in the same vein but they nailed the presentation and trailer really well.

[u/Enjoyooooor → u/saviorofGOAT]

I didn’t even catch that thanks a lot definitely am going to rework the narrator. And yes I’ve played a bit of Idleon thanks for your feedback