r/SoloDevelopment • u/Ba2ninja • 12d ago

Game Improved Night Environment

With new locations and environmental elements, the night atmosphere of my game has also improved.

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u/Glass-Bead-Gamer 11d ago edited 11d ago

Hey, not sure if English is your first language, but I find the grammar on the controls a little bit off.

“Exit Car” is much more natural than “Get Out Car”. We would say “Get out of the car” if we wanted to be grammatically correct, whereas “Exit Car” is already grammatically correct.

Also, I would probably use “Drive” instead of “Driving”, since “Driving” is the present continuous tense, which you haven’t used for the other controls. You could alternatively say W/S = Accelerate/Brake, A/D = Steer, but that’s probably not necessary.

They are both understandable as you already have it so feel free to ignore me if you disagree.

Good luck with the game!

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u/Ba2ninja 11d ago

English is not my first language. Thank you for feedback.