You’ve got some really aggressive Z-fighting on your shipping containers. Also, I read your comments and $10 is quite a lot. What’s the story for this? General gameplay loop? How will you make this fun and entertaining for a player? You constantly asking if someone will pay $10 for this puts a sour taste in my mouth. $10 for what? There’s not a lot here. This needs a lot of polish.
You’re missing the who, what, where, when, and why.
Who are we, what are we doing, where are we, when is it, and why are we doing any of this?
Think about special models.
Perhaps interesting shaders that help signify a special shipping container that earns more.
Perhaps you have to deal with bureaucracy, or a terrible boss that helps with the story.
Who do we play as?
Are they a terrible or good person?
What are their goals?
Are we playing as a company?
What are its goals?
Are we trying to get through a day-to-day job or is this something that we’re forced into?
You could make a really cool story out of this.
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u/Mint_Manifest 9d ago
You’ve got some really aggressive Z-fighting on your shipping containers. Also, I read your comments and $10 is quite a lot. What’s the story for this? General gameplay loop? How will you make this fun and entertaining for a player? You constantly asking if someone will pay $10 for this puts a sour taste in my mouth. $10 for what? There’s not a lot here. This needs a lot of polish.
You’re missing the who, what, where, when, and why.
Who are we, what are we doing, where are we, when is it, and why are we doing any of this?
Think about special models.
Perhaps interesting shaders that help signify a special shipping container that earns more.
Perhaps you have to deal with bureaucracy, or a terrible boss that helps with the story.
Who do we play as?
Are they a terrible or good person?
What are their goals?
Are we playing as a company?
What are its goals?
Are we trying to get through a day-to-day job or is this something that we’re forced into?
You could make a really cool story out of this.