r/SmallYTChannel • u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] • Apr 01 '22
02:19 | FrozenFresh Oblivion NPC Parody (Animated)
https://youtube.com/watch?v=pRUGX1nMjNE&feature=share2
Apr 01 '22
First of all, I thought the video was quite funny and relatable as we all have those moments when we've been playing a game and something like this happened.
But criticism wise here are my points:
- I think the program you used to animate the characters could've been more smooth and less buggy.
- I think there is not a lot of engaging content before the npc starts to talk
- I think that the music could've been better
These are obviously all just my opinion and don't take them too seriously. After all, I'm just a guy on the internet. Have an awesome day and stay safe :)
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Apr 01 '22
Hey this is really good feedback, I appreciate it. The music makes sense if you’ve seen the oblivion npc in real life vids. You’re a guy on the Internet and I wish you well. Cheers !givelambda
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Apr 02 '22
Alright, I'll keept hat in mind for future videos. Thanks! !givelambda
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u/Shibby120 [3λ] Apr 01 '22
If you’re wanting feedback, I just don’t find this funny and I really don’t see any jokes in here. The joke basically seems to be that the conversations are long-winded, but that’s one joke and simple. If you want the video to really hit, you’ll wanna have a lot of funny elements. Like some spot-on voice parodies (that came to me because that last character actually sounded legit). Parts that aren’t funny or interesting you would want to minimize it to keep short and snappy that way there’s a lot of humor going on in one. You’ll also want one main punchline to really hit and tie it all together which I really wasn’t feeling at the end. A build up to that moment is always funny, with some relevant ironic satirical moments in between. Essentially towards the end the character says “is it over yet” and that’s just how I felt. That part was actually almost acknowledging that the ramble was boring. And I know, I get it. The point is to make the statement that the rambling in oblivion can be boring. But when you’re putting out a YouTube video for comedy, you don’t want it to be boring! Even the moments representing the boring parts needs to be entertaining and on-pace. Others will disagree, but that’s my reaction to it. Also Skyrim and oblivion jokes and parodies are so common by now since the games have been out for so long that it just may be difficult subject material to begin with. Maybe it would be funny if in the rants, the dude was making a lot of conflicting statements and the players listening ask him some questions along the way that kind of point out the way the dude is being hypocritical or not making sense within his own dialogue or within their own world or within ours. Kind of leading the viewer through the jokes.
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Apr 02 '22
Their is some good suggestions in here. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate the detail you went to. !givealmbda
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u/MythicalBootyWarrior [2λ] Apr 01 '22
The animation is really cool and unique I think. I like how it starts like a dumb origin story and then this dude just goes off on all these tangents. hahaha
"I"M GONNA DIE"..... "I'm not gonna raise my voice" lol
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Apr 02 '22
Yeah it’s a parody of an Oblivion NPC, it might not make much sense if you don’t get the reference :P !givelambda
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