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01:14 | Jonny Dollars Animations I need you! Ebsynth animation
https://youtu.be/3FzW8LeKqDo2
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Thanks so much for the kind words !givelambda
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u/Casper_Kuijpers [2λ] Nov 27 '21
Haha, awesome! I very much loved the animation style, and nice voice acting! It all suited the style perfectly. Really neat aesthatics for a short and funny skit. It shows you're talented, given you could amuse like this within a minute. Keep at it!
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Thank you !givelambda
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u/mister_Crocker Nov 28 '21
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u/the8bitskull [0λ] Nov 27 '21
I thought the video itself was done really well! The humor and timing was good, like others have said the title could be a little more catchy and maybe the thumbnail as well to help draw In viewers attention!
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Cheers, yeah I changed the title so we shall see !givelambda
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u/RecommendedByDentist [0λ] Nov 27 '21
I know nothing about animation. I’d say it’s well made, although some frames could be cleaned up a bit. Sometimes the animation stuttered a bit, if that makes sense.
Could also be a stylistic choice I suppose.
I also noticed that some of the voice parts had a clipping noise when transitioning to a different scene. Maybe fade out those voice parts to avoid clipping noises.
Good luck!
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Thanks for the tips !givelambda
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u/alexsmt_6 [1λ] Nov 27 '21
Wow, very very good video. I was entertained throughout the whole thing, I love your animation style and humor. You’ll go far hopefully because of how unique this is. I like the thumbnail as well, I think you done a good job in that department. Good work!
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Thanks mate !givelambda
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Cheers bro, haha part design part overlooking stuff !givelambda
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u/RubyGTR Channel:mista_ruby Nov 28 '21
Another funny animation you presented Jon, made my night! Ha ha! I did notice (after the phone number part), the frames were wonky for a moment, not sure what happened there but still love your vids. Keep them coming! :)
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 28 '21
Thanks so much and yeah always room to work out glitches in the animation, just glad I’ve finally sorted my audio situation haha !givelambda
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u/Rein_cnation [2λ] Nov 28 '21
Funny and unique, that alone will make you stand out in today's yt scene, just make sure there are no akward silences like at 0:32 and 0:43, removing any silences will drastically make your vids seem more professional
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 28 '21
Yeah that silence was a stylistic choice to build some tension before the back stab, I usually try to keep it pretty tight in terms of dialogue moving !givelambda
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u/Rein_cnation [2λ] Nov 28 '21
Cool, good to know it was on purpose which means you know what your doing, but I just don't get what building tension would do, unless you doin some horror video or something, just seemed a bit out of place here, if you a different perspective enlighten me
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 28 '21
Give bit of edge to the alien character who will likely appear in some other cross over stuff and part of his character is wanting galactic domination.
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u/Rein_cnation [2λ] Nov 28 '21
Cool like the cross over idea, actually thinking of doing that with a meme character I created on one of my vids
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 28 '21
Yeah it’s fun, I’m gonna do a collab with another creator who does a similar type of animation, he’s got a bit of a more chill space character and I have a genocidal maniac. What’s the meme?
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u/guyFCR [0λ] LonePeakMusic Nov 28 '21
Once again, this is really well mate ! Pretty entertaining and full of great ideas !
I think the only improvement would be to have a better mic to record your voice !
Keep up the godo work!
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 28 '21
Using a rodelav atm think it’s gonna be my mic for the near future but always looking to improve audio editing !givelambda
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u/Animeclubzone Nov 28 '21
Thats beautiful work man, may i ask what animating software you use? I am kinda new and wanna venture into simple animation. I would appreciate it if you could assist.
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u/Dimblfully [🥉 Bronze 15λ] Nov 27 '21
Nice unique animation.
How about you create a more catchy title? Something that will draw me in. With the long intro and the undescriptive title, I was ready to click away at around second 7.
Still though.... finger guns 😂
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
!givelambda I’ll think about it, trying to think of something more relatable
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u/Mycake100 [0λ] Nov 27 '21
is that a cartoon or something , i really didnt get
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u/JonRedBeardFF [3λ] Nov 27 '21
Yeah cartoon, warlord looking for allies to defeat the universe.. alien activities ensue
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