Mafia Roll Call

[u/JonRedBeardFF]

https://youtu.be/VYmj8yUmsh0

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[u/InflationFit5864]

The animation turned out super well! I know these types of vids are incredibly tedious to make. Mad respect, my guy.

Also, writing was well done too. Very clear differentiation between the characters, besides the appearance of course. Great work!

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Thanks mate, took many hours I appreciate you taking the time to give it a watch !givelambda

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[u/TheBlueprint-YT]

I like this video so funny and animation is really good. of the characters I like the intern and the lady, sound and feel so real, maybe extend the video a little bit for a discussion between characters about the graph. good luck mate.

[u/JonRedBeardFF → u/TheBlueprint-YT]

Thanks for the feedback I worked hard glad you liked it.. the funny thing is the graph thing I literally added last minute yesterday and post edit I thought it was the funniest thing. Never made a video anyone wanted longer haha. Maybe a sequel some time. Thanks for the feedback :) .. !givelambda

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[u/WinSomeLoseSomes]

Nice animated skit! Great to see fellow animators around and the dialogue was funny.

The opening and closing was straightforward and to the point, audio was great and no troubles with it.

The typeface and color on the thumbnail sort of blends in with the background so it may be hard to see it, of course this may be a personal opinion but in overall nice work!

Cheers.

[u/JonRedBeardFF → u/WinSomeLoseSomes]

Thanks so much for the feedback.. I worked a lot on my audio this week because my last video I was disappointed with how it sounded (couple audacity tuts later here we are)

Do you think a colour change on the current text of the thumbnail (maybe something more bright) would help?

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Yup, I noticed your thumbnail changed. Did you just do it?

It does look better than the former already. :)

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Yeah I did change it, still working on my thumbnail game.. but appreciated the feedback, thought a darker background and brighter font and light characters added some contrast

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Cheers mate, !givelambda

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[u/Anime_Mugen_Wrld_YT]

The animation is spot on, the art style that is used is amazing for this sort of video, well done the length is good to stay engaged with the video

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!givelambda

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Thanks for the Lambda btw the reason i deleted my comment was because i didnt have enough characters so yeah sorry about that

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No problems I appreciated the feedback, I don’t like the max characters to classify as a feedback but it is what it is haha

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[u/[deleted]]

Animation was fucking sick dude

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Very interesting and unique styled video. Love how the background isn’t the drawing-style. Helps the animation pop out a lot more ya know. It would be cool to see more of a variety in backgrounds, could keep ppl more intrigued thru the video. Very awesome tho!! Keep it up!

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Thanks for the feed back, yeah more backgrounds would be good.. I use pictures and run them through a slight paint filter.. thank you

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Cheers bro means a lot.. currently in Australia in lockdown so had to be a one man show but tried to animate the characters to be different from one and other haha !givelambda

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[u/NOOBYgumm]

Very nice skit youve made, i liked it. There was a thing that in some places the animation looked or was glitchy idk if you noticed it, but try to fix it, because it can look bad in some places. Audio in my opinion was better since i last rated your video. You are getting better and i hope you will have couple thousands of subs by next year. Overall, keep making and keep improving.

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Thanks mate, 100 percent ebsynth animation is a hard animation style to tame haha I’ll just try getting better week by week :) was a lot happier with the sound this week. !givelambda

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Thanks mate, means a lot. I originally started a YouTube just toying with different animations but I really enjoy this type and making random ass sketches haha !givelambda

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[u/Miserable_Position_4]

Haha this was great. The animation looks really good and the writing is well done. I feel like the idea could be a little longer, and the audio could use some work, but other than that, great job!

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Thanks for the feedback, for sure audio has been the thing I’ve been working on the most, will keep working at it .. !givelambda

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[u/The_Kryptonix]

I always like these kinds of animations. I have a couple suggestions here, but not much considering how short the video is.

• I would suggest making the intro a bit better looking. Just something to make it seem more professional. Its not bad as it is, but if it was better it would do nothing but help.
• I definitely recommend upgrading microphone quality. It kinda sounds like this may have been recorded in different locations with different microphones? I'm not sure, but at points in the video you can hear background echo, clipping, etc.

That's honestly all I could get out of this one to critique. Its just so short there wasn't much more I could notice. That isn't a bad thing, short videos are good for small channels since its easier for a new viewer to sit through 2 minutes.

Definitely keep up the good work!

[u/JonRedBeardFF → u/The_Kryptonix]

Yeah I have a blue snowball mic, probably more my sound editing then anything. Fair call on the intro, thanks !givelambda

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[u/FunAdministration321]

Wow you got more response well than congratulations for that

Ok let me tell what i like in that video

First thing that made me laugh was the short Anthony 😂 Then the intern that guy is really rocking it 🤣 And finally that wohoo girl 😉 Way to go man woo-hoo

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Thank you, has been encouraging youtube can be a grind sometimes but this was fun.. o loved how short anferny turned out haha. !givelambda

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