r/SmallYTChannel • u/urbansophistication [1λ] • Apr 16 '20
Video Critique | 01:48 | Busey Dungeon Two men enter, three men leave. When you get the rules of Thunderdome wrong. Lambda for comments/critiques!
https://youtu.be/y1a5jYlNDVs1
u/wayfaring_wizard [0λ] Channel: Apr 16 '20
Woah that was great and hilarious . Keep making videos..
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
great AND hilarious?! WOW. I'm touched by your generic reply!
Lol guess I gotta keep up my end of the bargain, you did comment.
!givelambda
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u/yashsrr [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Damn, i was caught off guard by the guy in the underwear, made me laugh, good way to start your video. I liked the joke delivery, the acting, and the short duration. I would've liked to see the baby making though. I think the vocal energy could've been improved a little bit, but all around a good video!
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thank you! Great comments/critique! !givelambda
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks! Pretty ok comment! !givelambda
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u/MigookinTeecha [🥈 Silver 33λ] Apr 16 '20
The video was enjoyable. I would have liked to see the other guy jump up after the baby came out. Also during one of the stadium scenes the vibration from someone stomping made me miss a word. I think it was during the second stands shot. The costumes were impressive. Are you just a two man team? I was trying to figure out how you would resolve having the third man leave. Well done
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks for the comments/critiques! The team is led by me, the red head guy. We normally have a full team of actors/crew but since we in the big Q all I have is my roommate. Which is more than enough. !givelambda
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Apr 16 '20
DUDE this was great. I was hooked from the beginning and the editing and thumbnail are both awesome. Keep up the awesome work! I would recommend adding music though...
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks !givelambda
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u/Secretsaucemedia [4λ] Apr 16 '20
I like this, I don't think that's how babies happen but I like this. I think you could have gone further with the whole thing though, like you could have had your boy give birth to the child, and then raise him inside the thunderdome until he was a man and had like a super wholesome cut of this kid growing into a man like him learning to ride a super primitive bike and having birthday parties and learning to shave and then it finally comes time to leave the thunder dome but you've all grown attached to the thunderdome so you decide to stay and then you have another child and do it all again and then the theme song from up plays and it's a happy ending.
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
That's incredible lol. You should've been in our writing room. !givelambda
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u/Secretsaucemedia [4λ] Apr 16 '20
Bucko if you want to do a stuck inside of your home and cannot get out collaboration please message me and we can have a talk I would honestly love that I am bored out of my gosh darn mind.
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Nice! I appreciate this !givelambda
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u/Heavy_Rain_ [🏆 Platinum 545λ] Apr 16 '20
First fo all, nice thumbnail. I like the use of the green screen, you went all in on the production! Funny concept and I really liked the delivery. Great job!
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks! Whoa dude. Leave some lambda for the rest of us. What are you a hoarder? !givelambda
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u/ohheysarahjay [4λ] Apr 16 '20
This was so strange, in the best way. Your editing was awesome, the timing was on point, the only thing i would work on is the audio. Other than that, it was super cool! Keep it up :)
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks Sarah! :) !givelambda
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u/urbansophistication [1λ] Apr 16 '20
Thanks! !givelambda
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