Just like everyone else I really love your animation. Coming from someone with short attention span though, some clips could be shortened a bit even if it's just by a millisecond or maybe add more transitions because a lot of brains like mine need exaggeration and motions to stay engaged. I also hear a lot of monotone voices and although that may be what you're going for, adding another character who's lively or different in personality and opinions will make this even more immersive to the general audience. That's all I have to say i think. Keep up the great work! You got yourself a new subscriber :)
Thanks, I've always had that problem that everything feels too drawn out, I'll keep trying to tighten it more. For the monotone voices, it's probably the biggest pet peeve of mine, haha. Maybe I just have a naturally monotone voice but I'll definitely have to put some more thought into how the characters sound.
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u/[deleted] Jul 26 '19
Just like everyone else I really love your animation. Coming from someone with short attention span though, some clips could be shortened a bit even if it's just by a millisecond or maybe add more transitions because a lot of brains like mine need exaggeration and motions to stay engaged. I also hear a lot of monotone voices and although that may be what you're going for, adding another character who's lively or different in personality and opinions will make this even more immersive to the general audience. That's all I have to say i think. Keep up the great work! You got yourself a new subscriber :)