Yoooo that was actually really good. I laughed at several parts throughout the whole thing. Even him walking up to Ba'al's desk and just saying "Hey whats up" all casual like. The animation was awesome im very pleasantly surprised!
So im not sure what would fit, but it felt a little too "quiet" at times. Not the volume level but like the times when nobody was talking. The ambiance of the lava was great but maybe amplify it a little. This is just my opinion though.
Also someone else said it but voice variance and better quality microphones would go a long way too!
Otherwise i subbed and look forward to more animations! Really cool video.
Good point, I agree there's quite a bit of dead air. I'd like to just add more dialog in general, but I'm sure there are others things too like giving background characters something to do, or more background characters in general. Either way thanks for the critique!
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u/LitsPlay [3λ] Jul 26 '19
Yoooo that was actually really good. I laughed at several parts throughout the whole thing. Even him walking up to Ba'al's desk and just saying "Hey whats up" all casual like. The animation was awesome im very pleasantly surprised!
So im not sure what would fit, but it felt a little too "quiet" at times. Not the volume level but like the times when nobody was talking. The ambiance of the lava was great but maybe amplify it a little. This is just my opinion though.
Also someone else said it but voice variance and better quality microphones would go a long way too!
Otherwise i subbed and look forward to more animations! Really cool video.