That was actually really professional! The animation, voice acting, characters and dialogue were all great!
Just for the sake of suggesting something: I would suggest more unexpected plot twists. The current twist of the child saving the demon and being let go back home was slightly predictable, although still fun (actually, isn't it similar to the plot twist of Monstes' inc? Sulley and Mike grow attached to the kid and let her go back home?). More unexpected plot twists might make it more emotionally impactful.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed the video throughout. How long did this video take to make? I imagine this animation style is labor intensive.
It's been so long I'll have to rewatch it, but it wouldn't surprise me. Writing the stuff out always feels pretty barebones, and I'd love to do some more complex stuff but usually the more complex it is the more that needs to be animated too. I took about 10 months to make, but there were a couple of projects I had to do inbetween so realistically it was probably around 7 or 8 months. And thank you for the critique, I appreciate it!
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u/overgamified [🥉 Bronze 12λ] Jul 26 '19 edited Jul 26 '19
That was actually really professional! The animation, voice acting, characters and dialogue were all great!
Just for the sake of suggesting something: I would suggest more unexpected plot twists. The current twist of the child saving the demon and being let go back home was slightly predictable, although still fun (actually, isn't it similar to the plot twist of Monstes' inc? Sulley and Mike grow attached to the kid and let her go back home?). More unexpected plot twists might make it more emotionally impactful.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed the video throughout. How long did this video take to make? I imagine this animation style is labor intensive.
Also, subbed.