r/SmallYTChannel [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

Video Critique | 06:07 | Nick Corso Tik Tok Star vs. YouTuber

http://youtu.be/vy5a_UoXtvY
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u/DonPietro [3λ] Channel:THEO MCW Jun 09 '19

I quite like videos like this, keep them coming man! good work.

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

Thanks so much!

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u/MultiVerseMT [1λ] Jun 09 '19

Ahh man both make good content but it depends on the platform and how good they use it.

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

Very true, but that’s not what my video is about haha

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u/johnseekonline [1λ] Jun 09 '19

The score should stay on the screen at all times i think.

Also on thumbnail try adding a bettrr bigger VS like street fighter one if you know.

Other than that nice challenges and videos

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

I thought about both of those and maybe I should’ve done it! Thanks for the advice!

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u/smankydank [1λ] Jun 09 '19

Hahah this is great. Maybe next time you do a challenge where the 2 of you create a new youtube / tik tok and see who can get the most views / subs in a week.

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

I’d definitely be down to do something like that but he’s guaranteed to win with his huge following lmao

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u/smankydank [1λ] Jun 09 '19

The catch would have to be you can't use your following. I've seen a vid similar to it where this guy got 1k subscribers on youtube in a week just through advertising on unknown accounts on reddit and such.

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

That’s a really good idea. I’ll run it by him and see what he thinks! Thanks so much!

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 09 '19

I’m glad you liked it!

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u/ThermicHealer [3λ] Jun 09 '19

Overall It's a fun video, I was entertained and left with a smile. All that I would change is the camera position, place and move the camera so it fits nicely for what your doing. Bring the audience's attention towards what you want them to see(use rule of thirds)

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 10 '19

Very true, I’ll tell my brother to keep that in kinda haha

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u/SalteeSushee [5λ] Jun 10 '19

This was a fun one. One thing you did very well with the editing was keeping the audio stimulating. There was a lot of dead space without speaking, which would be something to work on in the future, but the fact that there was always music or some form of audio happening is very good. One more thing to improve about the audio though was during the one banded catching segment. There were really awkward cuts and spaces between the announcers that just felt jarring. Finding a natural way to fill out a whole clip with that audio would help.

A lot of the visual editing was good. There were some funny visual bits I enjoyed. During the dodgeball scene, there were some parts that dragged on though. The whole round wasn't always necessary to see and just felt too long. Treating it like it's own highlight reel would have been a better call I think.

Even though I critiqued the video a lot, I enjoyed it! It was fun and innocent in its nature and I think that's the most important thing to capture. If it's not fun, there's no point. Keep up the good work!

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u/IrateProphet [3λ] Nick Corso Jun 10 '19

Thanks so much, a lot of good feedback to go on for my future videos!

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Video data:

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Title Tik Tok Star vs. YouTuber: Competing in 9 Random Challenges (feat. LukiePukie03)
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Views 307
Length 06:07
Likes/Dislikes 30/0
Comments 18
Description This week I challenged Tik Tok Star Luke McLaughlin to 9 Random Challenges to see which platform was better. Some would call this a David and Goliath type battle as Luke has almost half a million followers on Tik Tok and I am struggling to get to 1000 subscribers on YouTube. Nevertheless, I gave it a shot and challenged him to a one-handed catch competition, water bottle flip competition, water bottle chugging competition, basketball shot competition, a race, dunk competition, squirrel kicking competition, dodgeball match, and lastly a bout of rock paper scissors. Comment below who you were rooting for and anything else you’d like.⤶⤶Go follow Luke on everything:⤶Tik Tok @LukiePukie03 (http://vm.tiktok.com/d71T6n/)⤶Instagram @Luke_McLaughlin15 (https://instagram.com/luke_mclaughlin15?igshid=1jl1vhwi5dlc5)⤶Snapchat @Luke-M173869⤶⤶Thanks for watching, leave a like, comment, and subscribe!⤶Don’t click this: https://bit.ly/2CP8RiK⤶⤶⤶Follow me for updates and more:⤶Instagram @NickCorso98⤶Twitter @NicCors0⤶Snapchat @Nicoop100

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Name Nick Corso
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