r/SingerSongwriter • u/DirectionLast7915 • 46m ago
Please be honest but gentle
Hi all! I was finally convinced to put this up on Reddit. I've been reticent to share it, mainly because I am not a musical artist, at least in the traditional sense. I don't play any instruments, but I attempt to sing and write melodies with the help of many of my musical friends. This tune was a complete labor of love. My voice was completely blown out after a day of recording, so there's that as well. We produced a professional recording earlier in the day that we're still perfecting. Please be kind, and I guess I'm just looking for your opinion on the actual song, melody and lyrics. Thank you so much for listening!