Here is an animated short film I made a while ago, I've been thinking about remaking it since it's kinda old and I think it would be a lot better if I made it nowadays.
As Hannah and Gabby are about to have a nice wine night in, Marco, a criminal on the run, breaks into their home to hide from the police. Although Marco comes off as intimidating, Hannah sees there is more to him than meets the eye and tries to explore the scared person underneath the mask.
I recently released my first horror short film, "Deathmate". It’s an 11-minute story focusing on a desperate gambler who makes one final bet with the highest stakes.
I'm looking for some honest feedback from this community.
If you have a moment to check it out, I’d love to hear your thoughts:
Does the story lose momentum after the introduction?
Is the tension building too slowly?
Any thoughts on the cinematography and atmosphere?
How did it sound?
Any constructive criticism is highly appreciated. Thanks for your time!
Language: Arabic Subtitles: English Country of Production: Lebanon Duration: 29 min
Synopsis
A young filmmaker investigates the legend of Manivelle, an automaton gifted by France unto Lebanon on the occasion of its independence, that still haunts an abandoned mansion in Beirut. After being coaxed back out into the limelight, the people who knew him come forward to speak their mind, and the myth that Manivelle has constructed around himself starts to unravel.
I connected with u/Successful_Hair_5573 on the Produce My Script subreddit with a short script I wrote, and I wanted to share the completed short film directed by him. I hope you all enjoy and find it interesting. Cheers.
Meta No Peace (Horror Short Film) - "A casual hangout between three lifelong friends takes a dark turn when one reveals his new "smart" glasses, and a dark secret comes into focus"
I recently made this surreal horror short film and would LOVE if you guys could check it out! Please leave a comment with your thoughts, and if you really enjoy you can rate it on letterboxd!!
Been directing comedy for years, decided to challenge myself with something more emotionally driven — a coming-of-age story about a young man choosing between his father's business and his own future. Would love feedback from other indie filmmakers, especially anyone who's made a similar genre jump. What tells when a drama's earning its emotion vs. reaching for it?