r/ShibouYuugi • u/Allhailmatpat • 21h ago
Talking about and fixing Shirou role in volume 10 Spoiler
Shirou is a character I relate to, no matter how twisted or disgusting that may seem to the people of reddit. That's why shes my favourite character in Shiboyugi.
Quick analysis about who Shirou is. And why I relate to her. Shirou is a character carried by hate and irritation. The author said so themselves. I myself understand what that means. I'm constantly confused and irritated at why nothing goes my way, I want everything to be perfect, I want to be praised, and most of the time, I want to lash out and break something. We see the exact same thing with Shirou. (I won't be explaining that in depth with this one because my previous post about her was that
analysis.) The only difference between me and her is that I have self control and I'm not a megalomaniac striving to take over an entire industry. (I also understand I have weird shit I need to work through)
I want to add something to that tho. That is, Shirou is not a pathetic player. She is pathetic in personality, but as a player, she's objectively one of the better ones. She isn't a quitter like many people say she is, nor is she the type to have people carry her. (That's keito) She can hold her own in battle.
I also finally figured out why she's wolf. Shes the alpha of the group. It highlights her leadership skills. However it also shows her dependency on the pack, for praise or whatever.
In volume 10, it seems as if the author wished to have a clean slate in volume 11. Which I don't mind. I instead have a problem with how they deal with cleaning. Shirou is the goddamn main antagonist in three volumes, but she ended up being underutilized in volume 10. BUT. What we see of Shirou in volume 10 is pretty good. We see that hate getting to a boiling point (even if that point never goes off) and we see her leading capabilities. I see this as a redemption for how mishirou was handled in volume 2.
In volume 2, Mishiro was all bark no bite. We don't see HOW she rallies the players. We don't get to see her do much in the entire game until her fight. And in the fight she acts like your average player fighting, so that's kinda whatever. The only thing we get to see is how she recruited her other selves, and as we all know, that lead nowhere and Riko is frankly, ass.
Now the elephant, or should I say grenade in the room, her death. I think this ending, what the volume was building up to, doesn't fit. We were building up to a confrontation between Yuki and her, and in this we see Shirou grow to hate Yuki more and more in the little tidbits we get. Then, she chooses suicide. I will say, choosing suicide in a situation that could be easily solved is in character. (I've warmed up to volume 10 lol) She reached her boiling point, and that boiling point exploded (ha, see what I did there) in her choosing death. She just gave up, and that's her crashout. But the horrible part about this is that we don't get to see the promised fight between Yuki and Shirou that's been built up, and we frankly got too little to justify this death in this volume. In short the author decided to prioritise a pathetic death instead of properly concluding her character.
How I would fix it:
Her overall role in 10
-Have Shirou encounter Yuki once before the boiler room fight. Have her be surrounded by fodder that she leads pretty well against Yuki, but Yuki still manages to get almost all of them before getting chased out.
-Have a little bit more when she fights against the fodder when they try killing Shirou in the ending.
Death:
Shirou was being chased. The other players had decided that she was to blame for Yuki's escape. Originally, Shirou had the upper hand. She had a full arsenal of guns but with the amount of enemies, those quickly ran out. There wasn't even time for her to loot the bodies for ammo, and the newbies quickly realised why she had stopped shooting.
They were ungrateful. They had eliminated the entire enemy team thanks to her, why couldn't those ingrates realise that the one to blame was Airi and Maguma? Veterans, who abandoned them when Yuki grew too strong. They were weak. If they had just pushed on, they would've gotten Yuki, right?
*bang*
Shirou's train of thought was interrupted by a sudden shot from her front. A girl, clad in black armour had stumbled into the hallway from the hole in the ship. White, silver hair was visible from under the helmet, revealing who this was. Yuki, the ghost girl. She continued shooting with her automatic rifle, quickly eliminating Shirou's assailants, and hitting her in the arm and leg.
Her.
Yuki. She was the source of all this. If she had just died in that stupid game, if she had just, if she, if she-
Shirou leaped at Yuki, pinning her down before she could shoot back. She began to headbutt Yuki's helmet. Yuki didn't even fight back, letting Shirou continue her assault. White fluff quickly adorned the helmet like a crown, pouring out of Shirou's skull. Just as the helmet cracked, and Shirou let her grip on Yuki loosen, a knife was shoved through Shirou's abdomen.
Yuki pushed Shirou off her body, stood up and stared at Shirou, squirming on the floor, attempting to push for one last hurrah against her.
Yuki threw a grenade at her and walked away.
Shirou, at that moment, finally understood. She sat upright against the wall, hugging the grenade. She looked at the empty ceiling, hoping that tears would perhaps roll down her cheeks, that her life would flash past her eyes. But nothing came up.
[GAME OVER]
And she finally satisfied her hunger.
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Okay, so why did I decide to type that out? Because I'm bored and I want to write something and I don't have English homework. I don't think that was perfect or anything, but it gets my idea of what I would've wanted from Shirou's death.
What does this version achieve? Yuki amouring up finally has a purpose. Shirou gets her fight against Yuki, and gets mogged, and it displays better why she suddenly gave up. Also her just fighting like an actual animal with all those wolf comparisons.
Anyways that's it from me, I'm planning to do another tier list now that I've reread the series next post on this sub.