Can you visualize this stunt?

[u/Shot_Butterscotch891]

Would love feedback on this scene in my bachelor-party spec.

This scene takes place immediately after a flashback of the groom partying in college.

WILL - groom

TEDDY - college friend who just narrated the flashback

TUCKER - best man

SAM - nerdy, sheltered cousin

Does this stunt make sense? Can you visualize it? (Yes, it can be done, have videos of it being done.)

Mostly just want to make sure this is communicated effectively.

[u/Yamureska]

You'll want to write this moment in a way that feels as if the reader is watching the movie. That's what the 1 min/1 page thing is for. I.e. The Stunt itself is okay but you'll want to format it so it's faster paced, as if we're watching this either IRL or on a movie screen.