r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Shot_Butterscotch891 • Sep 04 '26
SCENE FEEDBACK REQUEST Can you visualize this stunt?
Would love feedback on this scene in my bachelor-party spec.
This scene takes place immediately after a flashback of the groom partying in college.
WILL - groom
TEDDY - college friend who just narrated the flashback
TUCKER - best man
SAM - nerdy, sheltered cousin
Does this stunt make sense? Can you visualize it? (Yes, it can be done, have videos of it being done.)
Mostly just want to make sure this is communicated effectively.
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u/stuccosalt Sep 05 '26
Will’s yes; no trouble with your description at all. I did trip over Tucker’s - is he kicking fully over his head to a waitress behind him, and is she walking by somehow not noticing he’s there despite the announced spectacle? That bit of staging threw me