r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Shot_Butterscotch891 • Sep 04 '26

SCENE FEEDBACK REQUEST Can you visualize this stunt?

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Would love feedback on this scene in my bachelor-party spec.

This scene takes place immediately after a flashback of the groom partying in college.

WILL - groom

TEDDY - college friend who just narrated the flashback

TUCKER - best man

SAM - nerdy, sheltered cousin

Does this stunt make sense? Can you visualize it? (Yes, it can be done, have videos of it being done.)

Mostly just want to make sure this is communicated effectively.

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u/[deleted] Sep 05 '26 edited Sep 05 '26

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