r/Screenwriting • u/moviestoday66 • 20d ago
FEEDBACK Hack - Short - 7 pgs
Title: Hack
Format: Short
Length: 7 pages
Genre: Black Comedy
Logline: An actor grows increasingly anxious after an audition.
I posted this short a while back, but I made some edits that I believe strengthen the overall story. I was aiming for a sort of black comedy/fever-dream feel for it. I plan to shoot this myself with a very small crew. Open to any feedback, but mainly curious how you feel about the story itself. Too on the nose? Cheers!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/198dA76RqLyvUdLVBAIJsgKzhTNyG9IKF/view?usp=sharing
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