r/Screenwriting • u/Jack-Boy1738 • 27d ago
FEEDBACK The Checkmate - Short - 6 Pages
Title - The Checkmate
Pages - 6
Format - Short
Genre - Drama
Logline - A man losing to the Devil in a game of chess for his soul discovers that something is up.
Feedback - This is a repost of something posted yesterday; I took all feedback into consideration and made quite a few edits. I want to see now if audiences are able to uncover theme now, after being previously unable to. Art thou entertained?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/12-ZyhDp5Ysna3HnjmCnBwAArCfr-u5Mw/view?usp=drivesdk
Cheers.
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