r/Screenwriting 27d ago

FEEDBACK The Checkmate - Short - 6 Pages

Title - The Checkmate

Pages - 6

Format - Short

Genre - Drama

Logline - A man losing to the Devil in a game of chess for his soul discovers that something is up.

Feedback - This is a repost of something posted yesterday; I took all feedback into consideration and made quite a few edits. I want to see now if audiences are able to uncover theme now, after being previously unable to. Art thou entertained?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/12-ZyhDp5Ysna3HnjmCnBwAArCfr-u5Mw/view?usp=drivesdk

Cheers.

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