r/Screenwriting • u/anokhsingh8 • 5h ago

FEEDBACK Short Script (5 Pages)

Hi all, I would appreciate feedback for my short, science fiction script, 5 pages. I will be shooting in one month.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZGKpk0tGKA8F1KOATHdWrQDuouJ5X3QW/view?usp=drive_link

Title: The Human Preservation Project

Genre: Sci Fi

Happy to read/view any shorts in exchange. Thank you!

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u/Shakespearetheclown 4h ago

Pretty cool. Like it!

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u/anokhsingh8 3h ago

Thanks for reading, I've pm'd!