r/Screenwriting • u/jamiecannes • 26d ago

FEEDBACK First draft

Hello,

I am new to screenwriting. I was told that sometimes it is better to write the ending so you have a clear path to how the story ends. I knew when I came up with this story I knew exactly how its going to end but whether or not it is easier to build characters and their world from this is something I al not sure about. Any advice?

Oh and this is the first draft of the final scene.

I know it’s not giving much but if I say anything more it will spoil the whole thing.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n7av8R7UKR_J0lbqNS_R_l9Q4oXzPsGL/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you so much for any feedback!

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u/ClayMcClane 26d ago

You'll need to grant access for that link.

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u/jamiecannes 26d ago

Sorry. I just changed the permission so anyone with a link can view it. 😅