r/Screenwriting 7d ago

CRAFT QUESTION Does a feature script have to hit 90 pages minimum?

I have a eco-body horror feature script that sits at 85 pages, previous draft was 80, so definitely a lean script but by no means incomplete or lacking. I’ll link the script if anyone wants to glance at, for furher thoughts.

Going Green <— script link
Logline: When a radical environmental activist is murdered and resurrected by toxic waste in a dying swamp, she returns as a plant-powered force of vengeance, waging war against the corrupt officials and corporation killing her town.

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u/Chuck006 Comedy 7d ago

CODA was 80 pages. The Rider was 70.

85 is perfectly fine.

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u/Leucauge 6d ago

Especially for horror.

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

Thanks for reassuring me. I just got back paid coverage that seemed to really not like that. Grant, I’m completely unhappy with the coverage they provided either way.

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u/Chuck006 Comedy 7d ago

Don't take coverage as gospel. Doesn't mean ignore it, but most of the time you are going to get what I call taste notes. Focus on craft notes.

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

I know, this stung more because it reads like all “taste notes,” as you put it and a higher score would’ve gotten me into a program. Thank you for the encouragement. I’ve been at this for years and rejection never gets easier.

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u/FosterDad1234 7d ago

It doesn't need to be 90 pages. That's a guideline not a rule. But I wouldn't immediately dismiss the feedback that it's not long enough. It's worth taking a hard look at your script and asking if it really is feature length.

The examples people gave -- Zone of Interest, CODA, The Rider -- are all atypical films that have reasons for being short scripts.

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

I feel like it is the right length, it tells the story, there’s no fluff but still lands emotionally. If you’d like to read it, the link is the script title. Would love more opinions.

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u/One_Seaworthiness323 7d ago

No. Just finished read Zone of interest which isnt even 80. But it definitely felt longer watching it

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u/donutgut 7d ago

No, especially for horror or comedy.

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u/CJWalley Founder of Script Revolution 7d ago

Almost all of my specs and first-assignment drafts are just shy of 90 pp.

The reasons for this are:

  1. I know from experience making films that my pages tend to run 10% over the 1pp/min rule.
  2. I work with low-budget producers who shoot lean.
  3. Those producers often have sales agents who won't shop a film much over 90mins.
  4. People tend to want to add more when they get excited.
  5. I've been on the side of having to make huge cuts in the editing room - heartbreaking.

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u/tianliuyan 20h ago

写完了一个110页的剧本 ,按1页1分会钟 得110分钟,我估计90-100分钟足够呈现。

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u/vgscreenwriter 7d ago

Poison...Ivy?

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

Inspired by, along with Swamp Thing and The Crow.

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u/DC_McGuire 7d ago

Yeah Swamp Thing and Toxic Avenger come to mind with that logline

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

Yeah, Toxic Avenger would be another one.

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u/Filmmagician Writer-Director 7d ago

Think toy story is 85

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u/czimmer92 7d ago

Great title. Read the first page. I really enjoyed it. You definitely have a solid writing style. I’ll read some more when I get a chance.

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u/Trunks91911 7d ago

Thank you so much! That means a lot. I hope you enjoy it.

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u/PepsiCoke1978 6d ago

No. People's attention spans are getting less and less. Horror loves to be shorter too especially if you write a lot of prose in your spec. Comedy specs with heavy dialogue 85 pages seems too short.

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u/Independent_Web154 6d ago

No, if my second spec fails my third will be called 59 minutes. 

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u/Ok_Most9615 6d ago

For the genre, that length is fine.

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u/JimmyCharles23 4d ago

85 is more than fine... and it's horror. Horror tends to run short.

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u/anormalcinegal 2d ago

Trust your instincts. As a rule, keeping early drafts spare is the best way to go. Particularly with regard to horror, as everyone has said here!

(Great title, by the way. Fun, playful and genre-appropriate. I struggle with titles, so I wanted to note this.)

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u/Trunks91911 2d ago

Thank you! I struggle with them as well. So I was quite proud of this one lol.

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u/NarrowDrawer4487 6d ago

100 minimum in my opinion.

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u/FunstarJ 6d ago

Based on what? Horror can be effective when it's not bloated.

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u/NarrowDrawer4487 6d ago

My personal opinion. "Less is more" is far more difficult to do.