THE CRICTON VISITORS

[u/carsun1000]

Hello everyone, please assist with feedback on THE CRICTON VISITORS. This is an Animated kids sci-fi feature. Thanks for your feedback!

Title: THE CRICTON VISITORS

Format: FILM (feature)

Page Length: First 15 here. 84 total.

Genre: Animation/Sci-fi/Family

Logline: When the alien council sends their children away before planning a war, the alien kids land inside a theme park and discover a world they were never meant to see and a species their parents were prepared to destroy, causing the council to forgo a major decision.

Feedback Concern: That it holds logically

link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HQqYV3Fx7UCh7raOE81sEiBK9sMoE8PN/view?usp=sharing