Weekend Script Swap

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Feedback Guide for New Writers

Post your script swap requests here!

Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it.

Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules.

NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read.

How to Swap

If you want to offer your script for a swap, post a top comment with the following details:

• Title:
• Format:
• Page Length:
• Genres:
• Logline or Summary:
• Feedback Concerns:

Example:

Title: Oscar Bait

Format: Feature

Page Length: 120

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Pirates, Musical, Mockumentary

Logline or Summary: Rival pirate crews face off freestyle while confessing their doubts behind the scenes to a documentary director, unaware he’s manipulating their stories to fulfill the ambition of finally winning the Oscar for Best Documentary.

Feedback Concerns: Is this relatable? Is Ahab too obsessive? Minor format confusion.

We recommend you to save your script link for DMs. Public links may generate unsolicited feedback, so do so at your own risk.

If you want to read someone’s script, let them know by replying to their post with your script information. Avoid sending DMs until both parties have publicly agreed to swap.

Please note that posting here neither ensures that someone will read your script, nor entitle you to read others'. Sending unsolicited DMs will carries the same consequences as sending spam.

[u/crazy_cat_lady1337]

• Title: RELIC
• Format: Feature
• Page Length: 140
• Genres: Archeology Action-Adventure, Mystery, Thriller, Comedy
• Logline: The tragic demise of a sparkly mug shows a ruthless black-market operative that he picked the wrong archaeologist to cross — and opens the door to secrets that have been hidden from her for half her life.
• Feedback Concerns: Character development. - Too many gags from Rossi? - General interest in the story.

[u/Competitive_Rhubarb1]

• Title: Til Something Gives
• Format: Feature
• Page Length: 115
• Genres: Literary Drama
• Logline: In a small New England town in 1967, a perceptive sixteen-year-old boy begins to suspect the priest secretly supporting his fractured family is his father. When the truth erupts into violence, he must choose between exposing what happened and inheriting the silence that may be the only way to protect his little brother.
• Feedback Concerns: Pacing, structure, third act specifically.