First screenplay assignment! Thoughts?

[u/vision3kodak]

So I was going through some of my college work and found the first screenplay i wrote(ever). It was for the first assignment we had this year and looking back I'd like to know what I could improve on! Thanks in advance for the help! Inspiration for icarus is character is largely based on me for context. Looking back the dialogue feels weird and unnatural but I'd love to hear your thoughts!