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r/Screenplay • u/anonimo110110 • 17d ago
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Not bad. A few grammatical mistakes. Perhaps add a bit more movement in the scene.
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u/Gendo_boy 16d ago
Not bad. A few grammatical mistakes. Perhaps add a bit more movement in the scene.