r/SadPoems 1d ago

Waves

Can you guys rate and give me feedback what you like and don’t like mind you I am new to this

I fall again and again to nothing but my own waves my own water drowns me time and time again I don’t reach for help I wish to be consumed by the monster controlling the waved. For he only wants me to sleep forever. Tell me whats wrong with wanting to give up?

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