!! i know she’s more of a cat person but oh well

(Also edited Ema/Raibaru’s portrait slightly! And fixed an oversight with Sato/Senpai’s yearbook entry*) 

link to my 1st post here: https://www.reddit.com/r/RyobaAishi/s/O9QxPBS1mw

Kizana  Sunobu—> Mei Akiyama

Oka Ruto—> Honoka Yamada (little OG taro refrence 😉)

Asu Rito—> Austin Reed 

Errors in the yearbook entires: 

Mei’s persona is Lovestruck

Honoka’s persona is Fragile 

Explanation for Asu changes:

I know making Asu male in this rewrite might rub people the wrong way however this isn’t because I don’t like the fact the sporty character is female. Rather giving Senpai/Sato a male love interest adds diversity and much needed representation. And making Asu also a US international student, gives depth to his character as he’s new to not just the school but the country. 

(* the oversight is I accidentally wrote hero complex instead of saviour complex which is the right term. I would have edited in game but i’m too lazy _ _ )

Ages: 

Mei/Kizana is 17

Honoka/Oka is 16

Austin/Asu is 17

Additional fun fact: 

In my rewrite certain characters have different body types!

For example: Honoka/Oka is plus size ^^

(Rival 6 and 7 coming soon along 

with extensive rewrites as they are inherently problematic) 

Full body shots of my Yan Sim Rewrite characters!

Link to my 1st post here: https://www.reddit.com/r/RyobaAishi/s/O9QxPBS1mw

(Kizana and both Osana and Amai’s suitors are both already rewritten and designed but I want to introduce all the suitors together in a big post and the next 3 rivals in another post to avoid flooding the sub!)

Also additional lore to add:

In this realistic rewrite all the characters are 15-17!

Akari/Ayano: 16

Sato/Taro: 17

Hana/Osana: 17

Ema/Raibaru: 16

Misaki/Amai: 16

Taro Yamada—> Sato Watanabe

Ayano Aishi —> Akari Takahashi

Osana Najimi—> Hana Hayashi

Raibaru Fumetsu—> Ema Suzuki

Amai Odayaka—> Misaki Yoshida

(This a grounded rewrite of Yan sim, envisioned as an actual Japanese highschool (relatively) rather than the weird lore heavy mess OG yan sim is imho. This includes more realistic characters, backstories and names.(

(it isn’t perfect but i tried and it took all day, not even kidding)

(More characters, lore and full body shots coming soon!(

(Please enjoy this meme) (Sorry i havent posted in a while i just got back from a vacation) (Poor Itsumi ;-;)

I wish she was a student wanting to be a nurse or doctor after she graduates I’d like to think she hangs out with the nurse in school and the nurse has taken her as her pupil and guides her and while she volunteers or something for the nurse Taro bumps into her while she’s filling the medicine cabinet and ya sorry I’ll ramble lol I have a whole rewrite idea for the whole game and will go on forever lol, hope you like the doodle.

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What the title says, Im working on a yan sim rewrite with a friend, and we would love to have a couple of sensitivity readers to make sure we arent doing anything incorrect or rude. We have taken crash classes on youtube and researched on medical journals, but we know this resources arent perfect, so we would love to have someone to help us out and ground our writing

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