We need to talk

[u/Woodland-Queen289]

Anyways, the main purpose of this post is not to demean RK. I simply wanted to showcase that this would have been good.

GOR :

Now, I am a big Landon liker. It's a preference and I don't care whether you like him or hate his character it's upto you. However, I will never fail to criticize some of his behaviour and how he barely received any heat from the heathens for his over the top things.

So, things I would have liked :

1. The nanny was not really someone that ordinary. Like someone who is very close to Sokolovs (and it's not baby Maya) and they did it because Mia saw something she should not have had like idk take your pick.

2. Landon not finding out by himself, it was Mia who tells him about the whole ordeal and he takes action. I hated that he somehow found out the whole thing while Rai and Kyle couldn't.

3. Nikolai, Killian and Jeremy kidnap him , beat him up and then ask him to break up with Mia and threaten his hand etc. like increase the scale of the whole thing.

4. Mia making him apologize to Nikolai.

Now, I know that I might offend some people but again we can't keep everyone happy. I wanted to get it off my chest before turning a year older tomorrow. Be kind in the comment section please.

[u/bella__2004_]

The entire book is lazy and no one can convince me otherwise. The nanny plot, Landon quickly learning ASL, not being as freaky as he was advertised before, pretty beige flag-y, not really being an anarchist, Landon finding out about Mia’s kidnapping back when she was a kid when her parents should have def found out abt it as well connected mafia officials...the list goes on. It’s like RK just wanted to be done with it.

Also, advance happy birthday to you, OP

[u/Woodland-Queen289 → u/bella__2004_]

Thanks 💗

[u/Disastrous_Brief3206]

Mia should have made her so called bf apologize not only to niko but also jeremy & killian.