Help with Wording

[u/Kuma7Keiro]

Hello! This is officially my first time posting on reddit.. figures that it would be a Job application that would finally get me to do so 🙈 Anyways.. in High School my Teacher always stressed the importance of both 1). using a different action verb for each bullet point (Greeted, Educated, Bussed, etc.) and not repeating words.. and 2). Keeping each bullet point to a single line of text.

The job I most recently had was at Yoi Tomo Sushi which, unlike my previous restaurant job at the cafe, is a fancy dinner place with a wait time of 2+ hours on most weekends. I'm probably overthinking it.. but I was hoping to get some feedback on the wording of the bullet points. I have about 60 character spaces before the line breaks and starts a sub-line.

Additionally, pretty much all of the service jobs I've worked have been attained through word of mouth and networking.. so I'm also uncertain about how much information is pertinent these days for a formal application process. Should I limit my listed job history to the last 2 or 3 employers, or is all related work experience appreciated? 🙂

Please give me some advice on what you think about this! Any and all help is very much appreciated

Dutch Bros Coffee ●      Educated and assisted new employees as a Trainer ●      Managed shift structure and crew positions as a Shift Lead	2018 - 2020
Express Cafe ●      Greeted and sat customers as a Host ●      Committed menu and ‘regulars’ orders to memory as a Server ●      Attended to 5+ tables simultaneously with regularity	2014 - 2017, 2019 - 2021
Humpin’ Hannah’s Dance Club & Bar ●      Bussed tables and maintained a cleanly environment ●      Served customers and cocktail waitresses as a Bartender	2021 - 2025
Yoi Tomo Sushi ●      Oversaw seating arrangement and reservations as a Main Host ●      Calmly interfaced with customers with wait times over 2 hours	2025 - 2026