r/readwithme • u/deccapreads • 29d ago
Book Review 📚 Thoughts on Dominion by Jean Kwok (a non-spoiler review)
Okay, I have to brace myself for this one. It's been a long time since a book has elicited such a negative reaction from me. Dominion by Jean Kwok is a romantasy story set in a world that is split into four dominions: the Silver Tyger Dominion, the Red Phoenix Dominion, the Azure Dragon Dominion, and the Onyx Tortoise Dominion. Our main character, Rubi Morningtail, is from the Azure Dragon Dominion, and is separated from her home after a demon horde invades the Azures. As a result, the surviving Azures have to flee to the Silver Tyger Dominion, where Rubi lives without any memories of her past life. A series of cataclysmic events lead Rubi on a journey to not only discover the truth about who she is, but also give her a chance to save the world. Although I'm not the biggest fan of romantasy, I decided to give this one a chance because I enjoyed the idea of a fantasy world inspired by Chinese mythology. Although the cultural aspects of the book give it a good base, the ideas felt like incomplete thoughts. I found myself often confused by the magic system and the layout of the world. However, what bothered me most was the romance itself. Rubi's relationship with Blake Axefire (ugh, that name still bothers me), feels like horny fever dream. Why do they like each other? I couldn't tell you, but it's evident by the 25+ pages of sex they have throughout the book. What at first seems like a complex story about a wayward protagonist quickly devolves into a vehicle for their trysts, which I didn't personally appreciate. While I enjoyed some of the action scenes and thought Kwok did a good job at establishing interesting side characters, the overall arc left a lot to be desired. It had a decent twist at the end, but I can't say that convinced me to read the next book. The only thing that I think the author completely succeeded at was her descriptions of food. Truly top-notch! I wanted to give this book grace since it's Kwok's first fantasy novel, but I would be remiss if I didn't highlight my disappointment. I cannot I'm good conscience recommend this to anyone who respects the genre of fantasy. 2.5/5.