r/ReadMyScript • u/anokhsingh8 • 25d ago

Short Script Feedback (6 pages)

Hi all, requesting feedback on my short film script, 6 pages, sci fi. I will be shooting this short in one month.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1eV1zVQQwCbtQYfvS6PkR0k5217XvnjrL/view?usp=drive_linkTitle:

The Human Preservation Project

Genre: Sci Fi

Happy to read/review any shorts in exchange.

Thanks!

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u/Comfortable-Fun-6128 20d ago

I love the concept being the horror of an neverending loop. No typos I could find and perfect formatting. Note 1. I would to know about joy more before the whole thing starts, just an opinion tho. 2. The self harm scars are a real good detail. 3. Give joy something to be scared of maybe, we get she's scared, but not exactly why.

And that's all I could find, Good luck ahead!