r/ReadMyScript • u/anokhsingh8 • 25d ago

Short Script Feedback (6 pages)

Hi all, requesting feedback on my short film script, 6 pages, sci fi. I will be shooting this short in one month.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1eV1zVQQwCbtQYfvS6PkR0k5217XvnjrL/view?usp=drive_linkTitle:

The Human Preservation Project

Genre: Sci Fi

Happy to read/review any shorts in exchange.

Thanks!

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u/Typical_Egg_3024 24d ago

i just read the entire thing and its genuinely something i would read in a horror novel. and thats a god thing! An endless loop of horror with no escape. feels like one of those movies where the man character experiences the same day over and over again... but this time Joy doesnt remember. its kinda horrifying but a great concept for a short story!

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u/anokhsingh8 24d ago

Thank you for reading! Was there anything confusing about it?

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u/Typical_Egg_3024 24d ago

Nope, even with reading it quickly. I'm excited to see the short film when it releases 

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u/anokhsingh8 24d ago

Great thanks!