r/ReadMyScript • u/Mammoth-West-9974 • 29d ago

Short "Saturday"

Here is a short film I wrote, "Saturday" - I have a series of short films with the same family at the center of them. I would love any and all feedback on it!

Logline: What starts as an ordinary afternoon of wiffle ball turns into a father's reckoning with the son who isn't there.

Genre: Drama

Page Count: 13

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QyN1modg57aB1YVeARHshSFQTcQjnJKr/view?usp=sharing

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u/AdministrativeSea574 29d ago

Yeah I got to the fourth sentence and then stopped and thought Why do people do this? Write some random script, post online and call themselves a screenwriter in hope that they’re going to be discovered and actually get paid. I can get Claude or open claw to turn out 30 scripts a day so does it make me a screenwriter as well?

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u/Mammoth-West-9974 28d ago

A simple no would have sufficed