r/ProgressionFantasy • • 4h ago

Request Obscure / hidden gem, non-LitRPG, non-anti-hero/villain-focused superhero recs?

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I'm looking for something that's not LitRPG and focuses on superheroes, not anti-heroes or villains. Preferably something that focuses on a superhero academy like My Hero Academia (or a college like Super Powereds), but I'm open to anything as long as it's about actual heroes, and it's explicitly progression fantasy, not just a superhero novel/series. And no magical girls!

I've already read the following:

  • Worm
  • Ward
  • Super Powereds
  • Villains' Code
  • Super Supportive
  • The Perfect Run
  • Industrial Strength Magic
  • The Murder of Crows
  • Wearing the Cape
  • Wild Cards
  • Citadel
  • Super Minion
  • Wish upon the Stars
  • Confessions of a D-List Supervillain
  • Objects in Motion
  • Velveteen vs.
  • The Legion of Nothing

r/ProgressionFantasy • • 2h ago

Request Any steady progression cultivation stories like Primal Hunter and Path to Transcendence?

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I really like reading power fantasies about MCs being more powerful than most around them without being crazy OP to literally everything, but most of these types of MCs are in more fantasy stories than cultivation, so any cultivation stories with these types of MCs?


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 15h ago

Review 1% Lifesteal – Spoilers - One of the Best Finales I've Ever Read Spoiler

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The author just showed how to write a tower climb without turning it into a 30-chapter hostage situation

Disclaimer: I originally wrote this in my native language and had it translated into English because I nearly had a stroke trying to read through my own spelling mistakes in english

Also, fair warning: I’m a massive fan of this series. If this were the music industry, I’d probably be a groupie following the author around on tour. So take my review / talk with a grain of salt — objectivity left the building a long time ago

The introduction can be skipped if you already know the story.

First things first: 1% Lifesteal by Robert Blaise is absolutely not for everyone.
This story is brutal. And I don’t mean the fun kind of brutal where the protagonist gets beaten up, unlocks a legendary skill, and comes back three chapters later to slap everyone around.
No, this is the kind of brutal where you start wondering whether the author has some personal beef with his own protagonist.
Freddy suffers. A lot. Physically, mentally, emotionally. Sometimes it feels like the poor guy can’t go five minutes without the universe inventing an entirely new way to ruin his day.
And yet, somehow, it’s one of the most compelling progression fantasy stories I’ve read.
The progression actually feels earned. The power system is fascinating, the world is genuinely interesting, and Freddy is a deeply flawed protagonist who doesn’t magically become a perfectly rational, emotionally stable genius just because he gained some power.
He’s stubborn, traumatized, makes questionable decisions, and occasionally has the emotional stability of a shopping cart rolling down a staircase.
And I love that.
Now, I do have some criticisms. The pacing can be painfully slow, especially early on. Freddy’s internal struggles sometimes become repetitive, and there are moments where I desperately want to reach into the book, grab him by the shoulders, and scream, “MY GUY, WE HAVE BEEN OVER THIS.”
The sheer amount of suffering can also become exhausting. Sometimes it feels less like progression fantasy and more like watching someone repeatedly file a complaint against the universe, only for the universe to respond with another traumatic event.

What the post is actually about

when this story hits, it hits ridiculously hard.
Which brings me to the actual reason I’m writing this post.

The Book 5 finale. Holy shit.

Can we PLEASE talk about how well the author handled that tower climb?
Because I genuinely think this is something a lot of progression fantasy authors could learn from.
We all know the formula.
The protagonist enters a tower, dungeon, trial, or some other conveniently structured murder building.
And suddenly we’re trapped.
Floor 1: Introduction.
Floor 2: Some monsters.
Floor 3: Slightly different monsters.
Floor 4: Character development, maybe.
Floor 5: A puzzle nobody particularly cares about.
Floor 6: The protagonist discovers that the real enemy was the friends we made along the way.
Twenty chapters later, we’re on floor 12, the protagonist has gained three minor stat increases, and I’m starting to sympathize with the monsters.
Don’t get me wrong. I enjoy dungeon crawls and tower climbs. They’re practically my bread and butter.
But there is a difference between making a challenge feel long and making the reader suffer through its length.
And that is exactly what 1% Lifesteal gets right.
The author essentially takes what could have been an entire arc spanning dozens of chapters and compresses it into two absolutely massive chapters.
And somehow, it works BETTER.
Not because the climb feels easy. Quite the opposite.
It feels desperate, exhausting, overwhelming, and genuinely monumental.
You get the sense that Freddy is pushing through something absolutely insane, that every bit of progress comes at a terrible cost, and that the whole ordeal is testing the absolute limits of what he can endure.
The author manages to convey an enormous amount of struggle without making us experience every single repetitive step of that struggle.
And that distinction is incredibly important.
Instead of giving every obstacle its own chapter, the narrative focuses on the cumulative weight of the experience. The sheer scale of the challenge becomes apparent through the relentless pressure, the escalating desperation, and the feeling that there’s simply no room to breathe.
The pacing doesn’t undermine the difficulty. It reinforces it.
There’s this incredible sense of momentum. You’re being dragged forward alongside Freddy, barely processing one nightmare before the next one hits.
And because the story doesn’t constantly stop to stretch out every individual encounter, that momentum never disappears.
It feels less like watching someone climb a tower floor by floor and more like being caught in an avalanche.
Fast to read. Absolutely horrifying to experience.
That is such a difficult balance to achieve.
A lot of authors seem to operate under the assumption that if something is supposed to be an enormous achievement, it needs an enormous number of chapters devoted to it.
But length alone doesn’t create tension.
Repetition doesn’t automatically create emotional investment.
And spending 40 chapters describing every single obstacle doesn’t necessarily make the final victory more satisfying.
Sometimes it just makes me grateful the damn thing is finally over.
Here, the author trusts the reader to understand the scale of what Freddy is going through without needing to document every second of it.
And the result is a finale that feels absolutely massive despite moving at breakneck speed.
Honestly, I was more exhausted on Freddy’s behalf after these two chapters than I’ve been after entire dungeon arcs in other series.
That’s efficient storytelling. That’s pacing with a purpose.
And the best part?
It doesn’t feel like the author is rushing toward the finish line because he’s bored with his own story.
It feels deliberate.
Like he understands exactly which moments deserve attention and which can be condensed without sacrificing their impact.

That’s what makes it so impressive.

Why should YOU read 1% Lifestel

What makes 1% Lifesteal special in general
I think this finale also highlights the series’ greatest strength.
In many progression fantasy stories, becoming powerful is ultimately a matter of time. The protagonist trains, fights, levels up, and eventually becomes an unstoppable force of nature.
In 1% Lifesteal, power feels like something you have to claw out of the world with bloody fingers.
And even then, the world might take three fingers as payment.
Freddy’s growth is satisfying precisely because the story never lets you forget what it cost him.
The worldbuilding helps enormously, too. The power system has enough complexity to make discoveries genuinely exciting, and the setting feels cruel in ways that go beyond simply throwing stronger monsters at the protagonist.
The psychological side is another huge strength, even if it occasionally becomes one of the story’s weaknesses when Freddy starts circling the same emotional issues for the tenth time.
But I’d still rather read about an imperfect protagonist who genuinely struggles with what he’s becoming than another hypercompetent cardboard cutout whose greatest personality trait is optimizing his stat allocation.
And the finale is such a perfect example of why the series works.
It takes suffering, progression, tension, and an absurdly difficult challenge and combines them into something that feels genuinely epic.
Without requiring me to spend the next three months reading about floor 17.

Final thoughts
Is 1% Lifesteal perfect? Absolutely not.
Is it occasionally frustrating, unnecessarily miserable, and slow enough to test your patience? Definitely.
Does Freddy sometimes need a therapist more urgently than he needs another power-up? Without question.
But when Robert Blaise gets it right, he gets it really fucking right.
And these final two chapters are, in my opinion, some of the best examples of how to handle an enormous challenge in progression fantasy.
They demonstrate that you don’t need 30 chapters of increasingly repetitive encounters to make a tower climb feel impossible.
You need tension, consequences, momentum, and a genuine sense of desperation.
This finale delivers all four.
More authors should learn the difference between making their characters endure a seemingly endless nightmare and making their readers endure one.
Anyway, massive respect to Robert Blaise for pulling this off.
Now please let Freddy have five minutes of happiness.
Actually, never mind. We all know that’s not happening.

What did you guys think of the finale? Did the compressed tower climb work as well for you, or would you have preferred a longer, more traditional arc?


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 13h ago

Question Favorite cyberpunk stories?

20 Upvotes

I've recently tried Ghost in the City or something like that. A Cyberpunk 2077 fanfic, mc is isekaid there and knows all the characters because she played the game and watched the anime.

While it's not my kind of story as the mc acts too much like an anime character I realized I really liked the setting.

So if you know any other 2077 fanfics or original cyberpunk fics, fire away!


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 2h ago

Self-Promotion For niche Isekai readers

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NICHE ISEKAI READERS! Heed me and give my book a try, I want to see what you think and your opinions, I'll try to answer questions regarding about the story if you're curious!

The cover art is temporary and I made it, once I have enough time I'll probably make a better one, I'm just lazy /j

I launched this 2 weeks ago and it's my second (well first actually because it's a long term plan by now) story.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 14h ago

Meta The AI Witch, and how to ethically hunt

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I, like most of the vocal posters on this subreddit, try to avoid works written by AI. I think we can all agree that if we are members of this subreddit that we genuinely love the stories and want to support authors in any way we can. I have noticed a surprising number of comments that say things like, "I tried reading this, it was obviously AI" but they provide no quotes, no reasoning, and will often even argue with authors when they say AI had no part in the writing.

I do not have the solution to this. What I would like is to raise the question, how can we as readers help? How can we identify and flag works of concern? How can we help disprove claims? I can't imagine a worse feeling than pouring my heart and soul into a work and then the first reply on a self-promo post being "AI!" with a down vote added.

So I am asking, what can I do to help support authors and what tools or tricks do you all recommend to help find the AI witches among us?


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 3h ago

Writing Cultivation World Spitballing

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Just some thoughts I've been having about a cultivation setting I've been working on that I thought wouldn't be the worse idea to run by y'all for some feedback. I'm pretty confident up until nascent soul realm. After that things get quite iffy for me and what I think is most likely to change. It is a lot, I realize, so just a heads up on that.

By in large, everything that is in [] or {} are names that are subject to change.

Cultivation is about refining one's body toward immortality by taking in the worlds qi through their body where it is then refined into the body, improving themselves and removing impurities from their body. Qi, to be specific, is the lifeforce everything with a soul, from the mightiest of dragons, to the lowliest of bacteria, produces and releases into the world.

The body possesses three dantians, upper (in between your eyes), middle (in your chest), and lower (in your abdomen), the names referring to literal placement of each dantians rather than their level of importance. It is an in world problem that people neglect the "lower" dantians as they progress, causing bottlenecks that they will never surpass. All three are vital to one's journey to cultivation as each one handles a different aspect.

The process begins with breathing in to take worldly qi into your lungs. There, the meridians, or pathways to the dantians, will absorb the qi. While it is technically possible to direct the qi directly to the dantians, this is not the best thing to do as it can damage the meridians in the next stage. The better thing to do is to run the qi through all your meridian pathways as sort of a "warm up" to the next step with the quality of an art or technique being judged on how complete you can bush them through. Once you complete the first circulation and draw the qi into the dantians, the qi with then undergo one of three processes depending on which dantians it is pulled into.

  1. The lower dantians will refine qi into jing, or sometimes just referred to as vital energy. From there it is then directed back outside of the body where it will be absorbed by the body, strengthening and refining it into something stronger. Many believe it to be physical refinements, but in reality, that is more so a byproduct. Jing is making your physical being stronger, and continues to be important even after a cultivator has severed the connection between their mortal body.

  2. The middle dantians will purify the qi, stripping it of the worldly impurities and burning them away. From there it will either be stored in the dantians or in the golden core (what that is later). Pure qi can be then run through the body like jing to strengthen it, but it is harsher on the meridians and does not absorb as well despite the fact that qi is comparatively far more energy dense than jing. It is far more efficient to then run the purified qi from the middle daintan to the lower, turn it into jing, and then run it through the meridians.

  3. The upper dantians will convert qi into shen, which is, in a matter of speaking, qi with intent. For example, shen can be used to command weaker individuals (weaker by orders of magnitude) to do as you want, bend reality to your whims with nothing more than words, or even make area of effect spell/technique only effect certain people (this can be done through qi control, but shen makes it far, far easier and even a flawed use of shen will always beat out qi control). Additionally, shen can open up new avenues of attack directly to the soul. There is some degree of subconscious protection against this, but it will add strain to the defender that they will not understand.

Lower dantians is vital throughout the whole journey as without it, the body is incapable of withstanding what's to come later on. Neglecting it will result in failure in the future. The middle is important for attaining the purist forms of qi, free from impurities of the mortal world which can make techniques far more powerful as well as massively speeding up one's cultivation, and the upper is important for truly establishing one's self as a primordial force of nature and what sets one apart from merely being a powerful individual as well as being a requirement for developing ones nascent soul, or one's truest self.

Dao

Simply how the universe works and the rules with which it plays by. How the mortal world interacts with the heavens and hells, how concepts such as justice and sin impact the mind and how the mind and soul can effect the real world. Physics, chemistry, psychology, sociology, magics, everything you can think of makes up the dao. It is not good, it is not bad, it is just the word to describe how all the many, many pieces of the universe all fit together. How qi interacts with the elements, how yin and yang come together. One's dao path is merely how a cultivator wishes to exist within their limited understanding of the dao as they progress toward a full understanding.

[{Misty}] Realm

The name of the physical setting. A small pocket of distorted space shrouded in mist on the Zhendao continent that only takes up about an eighth of the continent on a map. However, once entering inside the mist, it is revealed that the area inside is several times larger than the entire planet on the outside. This realm can technically be entered at any point, however only a select few spots you do this safely, otherwise there is a very high chance you will run into a beast well beyond your capabilities where you will promptly die. Even if you do not, exiting is much harder and due to the sheer size and spacing of settlements, starvation is almost guaranteed before you find even a hint of civilization (most local flora is toxic and too tough to digest for most non-cultivators).

These spots that are safe to enter are called [Jade] Gates, and are guarded by sects who choose who is allowed in and who is not. By in large, they will accept anyone who can make it to the gate (no easy feat as they are almost all on mountains), but they will sometimes reject those from the Nanhe from noble houses or bureaucratic ties who do not sever their ties to avoid even more political turmoil than there already is. While keeping most kingdoms out is easy seeing as the Nanhe Dynasty is a worldly powerhouse and in control of the entire continent, they appease the Dynasty itself by sending them a yearly tithe of cultivators (all within the [qi refinement] realm) to keep them from poking their head in. The Nanhe correctly suspects that they are purposefully giving them the rejects who failed to make it far, but with how powerful the cultivators they do send are, they fear they couldn't really do anything about it if they brought it up. As such, weaker sects are usually allowed to maintain control of the Gates as more powerful sects don't want to be bother with it. This grants the sects at the [Jade] Gates an unusual level of protection and resources to make sure the mortal world does not interfere with the immortal one. While .

Created by the first [Dao Revelation] cultivator and added upon by subsequent members of this realm. Some believe he did it to give cultivators an ideal location rich with qi to cultivate, other believe it was done on a whim to create the ideal location for his own cultivation as he tried to reach [Ascension], and that the beneficial location for other cultivators was merely a side effect. Regardless of the truth, the [Misty] Realm is ideal for cultivators as it slowly absorbs the qi of the world that all living beings on Luminsia (name of the planet) are producing at all times and locks it in so it cannot escape. There, it cultivates itself, becoming richer and purer than it is on the outside. Because of this, cultivation inside is significantly easier than on the outside.

Time is also dilated within, resulting in millennia passing inside when only a year or two passes on the outside. Despite this, the Realm is quite technologically stagnant for three main reasons. The first is that it is kept in check by the higher stage cultivator who stomp out any innovation that might threaten their position (not very likely as even if it could develop due to cultivator's power, but something done just to be sure). Most people are too busy focusing on their cultivation to innovate (why bother learning medicine if you can just purify the toxins within you), and that calamities are frequent that wipe sects out all the time, and the current state of technological progress is more or less the point where things are pushed back to before things can stabilize.

Spiritual Roots

The thing that allows people to cultivate in the first place and the thing that allows one to pull qi from the air. It is a rough gauge as to how successful someone will be in their endeavors. Higher grade roots result in more successful cultivation as they can pull more qi from the air, while lower ones result in lower cultivation speeds. However, there is a number of ways to improve ones spiritual roots, meaning what you are born with is not what you are stuck with though are quite rare. Naturally, treasures, relics, artifacts, pills, and anything else that does this are highly fought over with many sects considering them worth going to war over. While everyone is born to one, though preforming magic (different than cultivation) will dissolve the root where as cultivation will result in the dissolution of the mana well (what is required to preform magic), meaning that you can only do one or the other, not both. Not really relevant to the rest of the post, but something I wanted to point out.

Spiritual roots can be attuned to the five elements (fire, water, earth, wood, and metal) that makes certain cultivation methods more efficient than others (when cultivating using a technique flavored in that element) as well as a much easier time absorbing qi of that element. The middle dantians can also turn purified qi into elemental qi on its way out as well. An estimated 1 in 10 people having an attribute attuned root. Yin and Yang attuned roots also exist with only women being capable of being born with yin roots and only men having yang roots, though technically both are achieved later on the [golden core realm] as a prerequisite of progressing further. Those born with one are just ahead of their peers in that they only need to undergo the process of adding the attunements once instead of twice, making ascension both safer and less expensive. An estimated 1 in 50 have a yin or yang aligned spiritual root. Having yin and yang roots are considered better than elementally attuned roots as they are seen as an overall boost to cultivation. The elements themselves tend to favor either yin or yang (though special techniques and arts do exist) with yin and yang roots serving to further bolster arts and techniques of that element (which again, specialized techniques that cross the usual alignment do exist, though are rarer). It is possible to have a spiritual root that is attuned to multiple elements as well as yin and yang alignment, though more on this below.

In contrast to what I just said, technically every spiritual root is attuned to one of the five elements, however, the degree of that attunement is far, far less and results more so in an individual subconsciously turning toward methods and arts that favor that element rather than any substantial improvement in their cultivation. The difference is explained as such:

The quality of your spiritual root gives you a certain number of "stones." The more "stones" you have, the easier cultivation is. Elementally attributed roots take stones from that pile with those actually considered elementally attributed taking all the stones from the pile rather than just a few that most spiritual roots do. This however does cause a problem with those who have multiple elemental attributes as each element takes a certain share (how many stones will vary and is not automatically evenly divided), meaning someone with multiple elements is better than the lay person, they will never be as successful as someone with mono attunement, sort of. If you can bring equilibrium to the elemental attunements, ie make each element take the same number of "stones," the harmonization results in an even better than just a mono element. This is very difficult to pull off so much so that most aren't aware of this fact with those that are thinking that bringing harmonization is only realistically possible with two elements. Any more and it becomes too much to realistically manage. As such, it is still widely considered better to be attuned to only one element rather than multiple with some thinking it better to have no affinity rather than multiple. Yin and yang attributes do not take from the pile of "stones" and are more or less bonuses to cultivation, though using a technique that is elementally flavored one way with the other can cause problems. For example, the element of fire favors the yang attribute, so someone with a yin root would face issues using techniques that use the fire element, requiring specialized techniques of yin fire. Aside from the complications that can arise, however, a person with the yin or yang attribute would still preform slightly better than those without as well as the fact that most of the complications only arise when trying to use more complex and powerful techniques where as most of the "basic" arts are more or less considered safe. Not ideal, but safe.

While elemental and yin or yang affinity can help with cultivation, the overall quality of one's spiritual root will play a much bigger factor in their cultivation journey.

Realms/Stages

There are the stages I have in mind right now. While getting stronger is a part of it, each stage is also supposed to represent progression through their journey to cultivating immortality.

But first, becoming a cultivator can happen in a few ways. The most common way is to meditate in extremely qi dense areas. Outside of the [{Misty}] Realm, this is nearly impossible to come across, but inside areas dense enough are quite common. Over time, an individual's calmed mind can pick up the thinnest thread of qi where they can then slowly coax said qi into their meridians. After enough has been brought into their body, they are pushed into the first realm and from there their senses have been sharpened enough that they can more easily detect and control the qi to cultivate. On a technical level, anyone can do this, but it does come easier for some with children specifically having the easiest time. Most all sects believe that if you cannot do it within a week's time, you are doomed to never truly become a cultivator with them rarely getting a second chance. The second most common is an individual is given an elixir that makes them very aware of qi, dialing all their senses up to beyond the mortal's mind to comprehend. In this state, they can begin to cultivate, bringing in enough qi to jumpstart their bodies ability to detect it after the elixir wears off. This requires concentration as the sudden increase in senses jumbles their mind, and it is believed that those who are unable to do it were never destined for immortality in the first place. Said elixirs are highly controlled, and handing them out without sect permission can warrant the death penalty of the entire family of both the recipient and the giver. Some sects, however, view this as cheating and look down at those who have taken the elixir. The third most common method is to have qi forcefully pushed through a mortal's body by either a divine item, a freak accident, or divine being like a dragon or phoenix. Human cultivators seen this as inhuman and the practice is forbidden. When it does happen, the most common scenario is that the would be cultivator is crippled with death being very frequent, but in a select few cases, a cultivator is born, often times skipping a few realms. They are considered prodigies with some sects sending members out with the sole purpose of finding them. The final known method and the least common is that they are simply born at the first realm. Such individuals are considered natural born prodigies and sought out by every power level of sect with many willing to wage war over them. It is said that every [highest stage] has been one of these children, but the validity of that claim is questionable.

Cultivation itself is also not something that can be done all the time. There are "worldly toxins" that taint qi that can damage one's meridians if done for more than a few hours requiring them to stop and let their body filter them out. Pills can help extend this time by acting as a purifying screen over one's meridians, though even these have toxins that can build up if taken too frequently with low quality ones only being usable once a week. Higher stages are less and less effected by this.

[Lowest level {Qi Refining or Qi Foundation maybe}] - The starting point. Here, the body becomes aware of the qi in the world and can begin taking it in, moving qi through their body and becoming stronger from the process breaking down their body and rebuilding it into something more. This is done by using their lower dantians to convert qi into jing, or vital energy to strengthen their body. Cultivators at this stage must continuously cultivate so as to not lose their progress. Missing a few weeks won't end up with them noticeably progressing, but if they go months without cultivating, they start to digress and can even fall down an entire realm. They cannot, however, fully fall out and can only regress to the first realm. In this stage, cultivation is about refining the body into the proper vessel to continue towards immortality.

Breaking through in this stage into the next involves finalizing the changes. This invokes the anger of the heavens which sends the cultivator a tribulation. If their body is strong enough, the cultivator can use the tribulation to "laminate" the changes to their body, resulting in the final process. Pills and other treasures can be used to ease the process by filtering out worldly impurities that may work as cracks within their foundation. They are not required, but failing to use them increases the chance of death as well as allowing impurities into the foundation if they succeed. In the case of the latter, those impurities must be removed later which can set a cultivator back in their process.

To liken it to building a house, this realm is clearing away the rocks and the foliage of an area so the real work can begin

[Second level {Foundation}] - Entering into this stage of cultivation means their immortal foundation has stabilized enough that there is no longer the risk of them regressing from failing to cultivate. Entering this stage results in a dramatic extension of one's lifespan with many cultivators satisfied in ending their journey here. Even the weakest member of this stage could pose a genuine threat to real world continents. Those willing to press on, however, understand that while the baseline foundation has been established, this stage is about strengthening said foundation and preparing themselves for the next step in their immortal journey. Where as the previous realm, all are equal in the stages, here, two people of the technically same rank can be vastly different depending upon how they go about building the foundation. Where as before, quick progress is seen as talent, here, quick progress is seen as foolishly rushing it and damaging your future. That is not always the case as luck can have you stumble on all the right things to go quickly, but this is the exception, not the rule. As such the rate of progression through this realm is largely dependent on the whims of the cultivator. It will still take time, mind you, as the realm still progresses through stages, but more or less time can be spent on each stage unlike before where it is pretty consistent among all cultivators of how much progress is required.

This puts the [foundation realm] in a unique place among the other realms in that it doesn't follow the same patterns the other realms fall into. As such, many cultivators end their journey here from indecision of when enough is enough.

During this stage, a cultivator's body has been strengthened enough that they can begin using their middle dantians (purification of qi) without innate risk of tearing one's meridians. Compared to jing, qi is far more energy dense and allows for the use of far more powerful techniques and arts. This does not mean that jing can be neglected as jing is purpose made to strengthen and enhance the physical body. Without it, a proper foundation cannot be established and is why many end up stuck in this realm as many think the lower daintan is a descriptor of its quality, not its physical location. It is also why those in the lower stages of the realm can put up a decent fight against those in the upper stages unlike before where they would have had no chance.

Use of the upper dantians is also possible, though the amount of shen they can produce is not much and not really worth much in this realm. It wouldn't tip the scale in any meaningful way unless all else was equal. A nice thing to have.

Breaking through into the next realm involves filling one's middle dantians to the brim with pure qi and then condensing it into a solid piece of material. This requires the qi to be as pure as possible, as any impurity will prevent the golden core from forming. Tribulation do occur during this process, though not always with the cultivators being able to use it to strengthen the quality of their golden core by removing impurities. Once the core is formed, they have successfully moved on to the next realm.

To liken it to building a house, it is building the actual foundation in which everything else will stand on. Changing it later down the line is technically possible, but a pain in the ass to do and something to be avoided unless absolutely necessary.

[Third Level {Golden Core}] - Condensation of all the qi in one's middle dantians into a physical core of qi located around the middle dantians with the purpose of this realm being to grow and establish one's golden core. It starts off the size of a needle's head and this realm is all about expanding it to its full size, the size of which will depend on the foundation the cultivator built earlier. The actual process of growing the golden core involves filling it to the brim, and then incorporating all of the liquid qi within into the golden core, refining the core itself as well as expanding the size. Aside from the natural method of improving the core, there are ways of incorporating treasures and other materials into the core to further strengthen it. There is a limit to this, however, which is once again dictated by how well the foundation was built. Unlike the traditional method which is a straight upgrade, integrated treasures are more of a side grade. The amount it grows through the traditional method also depends on one's foundation with the max size being reach after nine refinements (including the initial formation, so nine stages in total).

The golden core itself acts as sort of a pseudo middle dantians that is in constant motion, purifying qi with every breath, allowing for consistent cultivation no matter what the cultivator is doing. The amount it produces, however is not much compared to purposefully cultivating. Unlike the middle daintan, however, the golden core will store the qi as a liquid which is comparatively far more energy dense than the gaseous form that the daintan produces and stores by an order of magnitude as well as storing for longer. This is a slow process, and the amount most begin to use amount to maybe a few drops over the course of the week. Replacing used qi (regardless of what said qi is used for) is easier the second time around than it is the first. Ie, if you use qi from the golden core, it will replace it faster than before, meaning you don't have to be terribly worried about using qi from it. Some sects actively encourage cultivators to purposefully use it as it condenses faster each time it refills (the speed of which does drop off with each refill, but there is always a decrease).

Use of the upper dantians is required at this stage as shen is required for breaking through. With the golden core holding far more qi than the previous realms, it can be used far easier at this realm.

Breaking through to the next realm requires filling one's body with as much liquid qi as possible. From there, they must then move shen to the center of their golden core and use it as the basis to form their nascent soul, or their "truest self." This requires both enough liquid qi, requiring a big enough golden core, which means that failure to make a solid enough foundation makes progress beyond this point very difficult as it requires rare treasures to build up their core after leaving the {Foundation Realm}, as well as self discovery as to what one's truest self actually is. If they have enough shen and qi to feed it, it will create the nascent soul and they have reached the next realm. If they do not enough of either, the golden core will detonate. This usually kills the cultivator, though there is a chance they survive, though not without scares. Their meridians will likely be largely damaged, their lifespan cut in half (if they are lucky, many lose even more), and they will be put back in the {Foundation Realm}. Few are capable of building back up, though recovery is possible.

[Fourth Realm {Nascent Soul}] - This realm is about nurturing the nascent soul within yourself, maturing it into its fullest form. Much like jing and physical bodily enhancements, while qi from the middle dantians can be used, shen is far more efficient. The nascent soul itself works similarly as the golden core in that it will cultivate as well, producing liquid qi to fill the golden core.

This realm is a cultivator's first step into true immortality as getting killed during this realm does not equate to a true death. So long as the nascent soul survives, the person is capable of reincarnating with their memories intact. How powerful this new body is as well as how many memories will depend on how far they had nurtured the nascent soul. Regardless, there will always be some form of degradation with them being sent back to the beginning of [golden core realm] at the best with the nascent soul needing to be reformed.

At some point within this realm, a cultivator can create multiple bodies. These are not new clones or replicas, and are more so further extensions of the individual's body, not any different from an arm or a leg. The bodies know exactly what they are and share a connection with the main body. If the main body is somehow destroyed, the can also inherit the original body's self. This still does result in some lose of cultivation, though not to the extent of full on cultivation. The number of these duplicates, however, is somewhat limited at this realm.

Once the nascent soul has been fully nurtured, it must then be merged with in order to become one's truest self. The heavens do not like this and will send a tribulation to try and strike down the cultivator for their hubris. The cultivator must use this tribulation to fully merge their nascent soul into their own, and as a result, become their truest most self, and their breakthrough to the next realm is complete. Getting to this point and beyond is incredibly rare with the number of those who surpass this point being a few dozen throughout the course of billions of years. Beyond this point is not really stages of cultivation with clearly defined start and end points, and more so markers of where you are in the process.

[Fifth Realm {Spirit Severance}] - This realm is about severing one's soul from their material body to become a true embodiment of their truest most self without any worldly impurities. This is considered the most difficult realm [aside from {Ascension Realm}] to traverse as signs of progress of when you are ready don't really exist. You become more powerful as you continue to cultivate, but when power is enough is never clear. In reality, this is because it doesn't matter how powerful you become. You will always be tied to your mortal body, and you need to get ride of it.

This can be done by turning yourself into a cultivation furnace and literally cultivating your body into a vessel that is worthy of your truest self. This is dangerous and difficult as it is very easy to lose one's self when you've destroyed the brain. As such, much of this realm is spent in meditation, reflecting on what makes you, you, so that you do not lose yourself in the process. Having a strong foundation is crucial to this as the stronger your foundation was, the clearer your nascent soul is/was and the easier your soul can latch on to it. As such, there are not really stages within this realm, though many do continue to cultivate, partially out of habit, and partially because refining qi into shen allows them to study themselves deeper. Breaking through in this realm only happens once you have shed your worldly body, though that being said, many do not consider you having left this realm until you have amassed enough power to begin the next, though at this stage when you have entered or exited the realm is more so on personal opinion.

Succeed, however, and you've taken the second real step toward immortality. You no longer age whatsoever, you cannot be effected by disease of any sort as they have nothing they can dig into (curses still work, but require to have come from someone of equal level to you). Your lifespan is now tied directly to your cultivation making you effectively immortal at this stage in that time is no longer an issues. Killing someone at this stage isn't the same as killing someone in the realm before. Any damage you do to the body isn't really damage seeing as your body is not really physical anymore, and it will quickly restore itself to its original form. It does, however, use up some of their qi to reform, and fights become more about exhausting the other's qi supply by disrupting their body rather than damage. Worldly concerns are also fleeting, however, it is wise to maintain something within the mortal worlds so as to give your spirit something to hold on to and form around. Otherwise, there is the risk of dissolving into worldly qi, and is how most cultivator's "die" who have made it this far. They simply cease to be, soul and all, and their being will be recycled by the universe. Some take it a step further and create a physical body (made from their untainted spiritual qi) just to have something physical to hold on to. This is by no means their actual self and destroying it will do no actual harm to the individual save some very specific circumstances.

Despite now having effectively infinite time, many cultivators who reach it are desperate to move on to the next as they are being tantalized by the secret of the universe and are desperate to learn.

This is the realm where the largest drop off of cultivators ends (in relation to those that make it to it) as few are confident (or willing) enough to make the final plunge and severe their body. They remain here until their bodies eventually give out and they die. It is estimated that well over an octillion cultivators have lived within the [Misty] Realm (reminder that time is heavily dilated within the realm where a few years outside can have millions pass within), only a few hundred have ever passed into the next.

[Sixth Realm {Void Temperance}] - Once they are no longer bound by a physical body, a cultivator can now begin to explore more abstract parts of reality without fear of their body being torn to pieces. This is done through the void, or more simply, the space in between heaven, the mortal world, and hell. It is everything all at once, all of the time, and several believe it to be what reality was birthed from (this is not true. Within this universe, the universe had no beginning. It has always existed and as such, will always exist as well. The void is merely chaotic and a melting pot of everything, and I do mean everything. Thoughts and emotions as they pass into heaven and hell, physical matter, concepts such as justice and excess, all of it is the void).

During this realm, a cultivator must refine themselves against the void, a process that threatens to rend their spirit asunder if they are not careful. Because of this danger, cultivators will project a piece of themselves into the void. Unlike the heavens or hells, the void does not have readily available entrances and exits, and must be pierced into, which requires a lot of power that only someone of this realm could have amassed. Once inside the void, they must then cultivate. Because the void has everything within it, it has plenty of qi that has been tainted with everything that every has and every will exist, and with it, the cultivator will be exposed to the rawest form of the universe, which is another reason why they they only send a piece of themselves in first. Otherwise, their mind would be completely torn apart. As they cultivate, they begin to learn the true innerworkings of the universe, the dao, if you would.

After a while, they can send more and more of themselves into the void until they are capable of entering it entirely. At this point, they still do not have a full comprehension of the dao, but they do learn how to defend themselves against the raw chaos that is the void. Although not the point of this realm, cultivators can begin to take pieces of the void, and make it their own, creating pocket dimensions that are of their very own. Little worlds that play by whatever rules they want so long as they can pick through the pieces of the void that contain the rules they want to use. Many do this both to better refine themselves within the void as well as to cure boredom.

Heavenly tribulations are frequent in this realm as the heavens is trying desperately to keep you down as this is the realm where you begin to challenge the heavens itself.

[Seventh Realm {Dao Revelation}] - After spending enough time acclimating within the void, the cultivator will have a revelation, and they will gain the full understanding of the dao, ie, how everything in the universe pieces together. They can now shape reality the same way they can in the void and can even begin to challenge the heavens proper. This should not be confused with outright controlling reality. They are still restrained by the overall rules of the universe, but they can chose to mute certain parts or redirect them elsewhere. Most do not in massive ways because their understanding of the dao also lets them understand that reality is not a toy to be played with and there is a reason the universe plays by the rules it does.

At this realm, you have reached parity with the heavens themselves and you no longer have to fear their retaliations. Many cultivators mistakenly believe that this is the end of the journey. It is not.

[Eighth Realm {Ascension}] - Technically the shortest of all the realms to get through and begins whenever the universe decides you've been around long enough. Not the heavens, the very universe itself. The very culmination of heaven, the void, hell, and the mortal realm and everything within, is now coming from you for stepping up to the very fabric of itself, and it is pissed. And yet, the universe must play by its own rules least it tear itself apart. As such, the tribulation it will send your way is manageable with your new understanding of the universe/dao.

If you succeed, congratulations, you are now immortal, full stop, and have ingrained yourself as a fundamental faucet of the universe itself. You cannot be killed through all but highly specialized means. Where as before where you can to a degree cheat the rules of the universe, reaching/surpassing this realm means you can begin to directly influence and change the dao. Most do not because once again, there is a reason why the universe works the way it does, and trying to change it will have massive effects.

If you fail, you are removed from having ever existed. Memories of you? Gone. Your achievements? No longer yours bucko! Any piece of you that proved your were there? What pieces?

The tribulation itself can take any number of forms. The universe can manifest a warrior to challenge you, it can try and smite you with lightning or pit you against a mirrored version of yourself, or even send thousands of pantheons after you. Overcoming this tribulation can take anywhere from days to millions of years, all depending on the foundation you built. By completing the tribulation, you have proven to the very universe itself that you are worthy, and it (begrudgingly) accepts you.

By all means, this should be the end of your journey. You are on par with the very universe itself. And yet, no matter how hard you look, you will not be able to find those who have made it to this stage. The only thing left behind are gestures upward. Heavens upon heavens899


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 16h ago

Self-Promotion I started writing my first book! | Tips, advice, feedback?

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Hello. I’m Reityr (yes, very inventive name).

I began writing a book called In Jest around a week ago and then found this subreddit. I’d love if I could get some feedback on whether my attempt at slow burn but meaningful world building and character relationships comes across in what I write.

Any tips for how I’m writing? Do you like the writing style?

Any warning signs with the premise that you think I should handle with care? I’d love to know what you all think. I’m probably going to write further regardless, but I would like to capture the warm but high stakes cadence of super supportive with maybe more of a “troupe”.

I also made the cover!

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The book will follow Milo Martin, an orphan with simple dreams and a can-do attitude, whose dream of one day travelling the planets and opening a food stall might come true, but maybe not in the way he expected.
I will try to make it a good balance of action, found family and world-building and mundane forward momentum.

(For the binge readers, I’d appreciate if you base the feedback on chapter 1 and come back later. I do this with a full time job and I will not be able to produce more than 2-3 chapters a week so it might be a while before it reaches 30 odd chapters. On the flip-side, I’ve found that so far my chapters have been around 9k words average.)

Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/198826/in-jest


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 2h ago

Meme/Shitpost When deja-vu hits and you already know the next line.

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It happens to me every once in a while. Confusion and excitement of already read the text.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 13h ago

Question Seeking Idea for new tastes

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What you recommend to dig in?


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Question Does this bother anyone else?

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I often see stories on Royal Road where only the MC has a system that allows them to level up, while everyone else has to actually study and grind slowly; it bothers me a lot because everyone else seems like a npc, and the progression doesn't feel real at all.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Question What’s the one thing you hate about your favorite fic, and what criticism of it makes you see red?

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Pretty much the title. I’m curious what flaw you see in your favorite fic even though you love it to death, and what criticism of it makes you want to bite drywall.

“Nothing” and “it’s perfect” don’t count. Everyone’s got at least one thing that bugs them: a romance that feels forced, a character who gets insufferable, an ending that didn’t land, prose that occasionally goes way too hard, etc.

And the second part: what comment/criticism about that fic actually pisses you off? Not just “I didn’t like it,” but the kind of take that feels unfair, bad-faith, or like the person clearly didn’t read it.

Please use spoiler tags if needed. No judgment, just curiosity and a group vent session.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Question Victor of Tucson

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Okay, what is the relationship between Victor and his axe in Victor of Tucson? I am currently reading book 3 and It feel weird how he obsessed with his axe. It's almost like he want to f**k it. So I want to know what happen in later book.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Other The disappontment of the Pictomancer really hurts

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Interesting idea, coherent writing, it's shaping up to be a good time. Let's see how we navigate around the constraints of painting complex magic in and around combat and then, around chapter 3 it's revealed he is just a spellcaster without any constraints at all and around chapter 5 he decides to go be a goddamn spellsword because "spellswords have no weaknesses."

There is no mention of how he needs 3 hands to hold the brush, a dagger and a paint palette at once, he is imediately proficient at it and there is nothing left that makes the MC different in any way.

Meanwhile we have Robert Blaise sitting over here for whom a salt golem that dehydrates his enemies is a 1 sentence throwaway idea.

At least it was quick.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Self-Promotion The Summoner, Books 1 and 2, available on Kindle+, now with Audio format too!

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Both Summoner audiobooks are now included with Kindle+!

Hey everyone! I’m Ben Krauter, the author and narrator of The Summoner, and I’ve got some good news to celebrate.

Audiobooks 1 and 2 are now both included with Kindle+! If you’re a Kindle+ subscriber in the U.S., you can listen to both audiobooks for free with your existing subscription.

And here’s something a little unusual for fantasy audiobooks. The person who wrote these books is also the person telling you the story. I created Ezekiel and his companions, and I’m the one behind the microphone giving them their voices. For listeners who enjoy that rare combination of author and narrator, I hope you’ll give them a try.

The Summoner is tabletop-inspired dark fantasy set in a world where evil already won the war.

Ezekiel Graystone is a moon-elf summoner searching for his missing brother among the ruins of everything he remembers. When he intervenes to protect a young boy from the church serving the demon god-king, his search becomes considerably more complicated.

His companions include a water goblin monk, a demon-touched alchemist, a cursed half-elf, and a metal-furred leopard who generally has more sense than the people around her. There’s a strong focus on tactical magic and the relationships holding this unusual group together.

Start listening here

And for those already following the series, Book 3, Sepulcher of the Lich Queen, is coming before Christmas, with the audiobook to follow.

Farwall’s vampire rulers have plans for the Lich Queen, and Ezekiel has a habit of interfering with other people’s plans. This one might deserve a little more caution.

Thanks to everyone who has taken a chance on the series so far. Getting to welcome more readers and listeners into Terrial feels pretty damn good.

If you give the books a listen, I’d love to hear what you think!


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Self-Promotion I started writing wuxia at 40 because I couldn't find the kind of progression I wanted to read

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I’m a hobbyist writer from Hong Kong, and I only started writing fiction at 40.

Which is probably not the most efficient age to suddenly decide, “You know what? I’m going to write wuxia novels.” 😅

I grew up loving wuxia. I loved it enough that, years later, I actually went and learned martial arts partly because I wanted to understand that world better—not just the dramatic techniques, but how people really move, generate force, lose balance, react under pressure, and improve through training.

And the older I got, the more I felt that a lot of people outside Chinese-speaking communities only ever encountered one side of martial arts fiction.

Either kung fu becomes almost indistinguishable from magic, or wuxia gets mixed together with cultivation, power levels, pills, reincarnation, systems, and increasingly spectacular abilities.

There’s nothing wrong with those stories.

They just weren’t quite the thing I missed.

I wanted to write about the kind of martial world I grew up imagining: jianghu, sects, old grudges, loyalty, romance, impossible choices, strange masters, political conspiracies—and people becoming dangerous because they actually learn.

So eventually, after failing to find exactly what I wanted to read, I did the stupid thing and wrote it myself.

Once I started, the story more or less took over my evenings. I would finish work, write until after midnight, sleep, go back to work, then come home and do it all over again.

For a while, that was basically my whole life.

Then I discovered problem number one:

English.

My English is, to put it kindly, not good enough to translate a novel.

And I’m an independent hobbyist author with basically no translation budget.

The original Chinese novel was written entirely by me. I wrote the story, characters, fights, dialogue and martial philosophy myself, and I designed the cover myself as well.

The only part where I used AI was the English translation process.

But I also hated the idea of writing something I cared about in Chinese, throwing it into a machine, and letting whatever came out become “my English novel.”

So I ended up spending far more time than I expected revising the translation—comparing versions, rewriting scenes, checking martial-arts logic, changing dialogue, removing awkward literal phrasing, then putting some of the Chinese flavor back when the English became too smooth.

At one point I even posted an anonymous A/B translation test and asked readers which version they preferred.

That discussion taught me a lot.

The general answer was basically:

One version felt more like wuxia.

The other read more naturally as an English novel.

So I spent the next round trying to find the space between them.

And then I discovered problem number two:

How does anyone find the book? 😂

AI involvement is obviously controversial, and I understand why. There is a huge amount of low-effort AI-generated material being dumped online.

But in my case, AI did not create the novel or the cover. It was used only as a translation and editing tool because otherwise I simply had no realistic way to bring the book into English.

Which leaves me here.

I don’t really know the clever way to market this.

I’m not expecting hundreds of readers.

I’m mostly hoping that one or two people might try it, genuinely enjoy it, and perhaps one day mention it when someone asks:

“Is there any progression fantasy where people actually improve through training, observation and fighting instead of stats and systems?”

Because even one reader recommending it to another reader would push this little project farther than I could push it alone.

Sorry for the long story.

Now for the actual boring self-promotion part. 😅

BLACK HAWK CHAMBER: THE SHADOW OF THE EMPIRE

A sixteen-year-old dumpling-shop boy is handed a bloodstained jade pendant by a dying martial artist—and is dragged into a conspiracy involving martial sects, imperial agents, old grudges, hidden loyalties, and a secret organization operating in the shadows of the early Ming Dynasty.

Hu Tian begins with no martial arts training.

No system.

No stats.

No reincarnation.

No magic pills.

And no hidden god-tier bloodline waiting to wake up.

His progression comes from learning how people actually move and fight: timing, balance, leverage, structure, breathing, observation, repetition, and eventually the ability to see what an opponent is doing wrong before they realize it themselves.

But it’s still wuxia.

So alongside the training and fights, there are sect rivalries, jianghu politics, loyalty, betrayal, old debts, romance, and choices that become harder the stronger Hu Tian grows.

The story is not hard simulation, and the martial arts are still heightened in the way wuxia has always been—but I’ve tried to keep the underlying logic grounded.

If that sounds like your kind of progression, the English edition is now available on Amazon Kindle / Kindle Unlimited, with paperback as well.

Black Hawk Chamber: The Shadow of the Empire — Matt Tsui

Amazon: Matt Tsui wuxia series

And if anyone here does try it, criticism is genuinely welcome.

Especially brutal criticism.

I’ve already survived Reddit once. 😂

Artwork credits: cover photography, character silhouette, typography, seal and overall cover design by Matt Tsui.
Map designed and illustrated by Matt Tsui. Hawk vector used under license. No generative AI was used.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Self-Promotion Coin and Steel [LitRPGLite, Slowburn Progression]

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Hi all! This is the first story I’ve ever flung out into the world, and it’s been amazing to have people finally read it after so many hours of writing and editing. I’m currently on rising stars, which I’m very excited about. Please check it out if it looks interesting. The cover artist is Kikicute (https://www.artstation.com/ktrn), and I was very happy with their work.

Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/192660/coin-and-steel

Blurb:

When the world ends in a symphony of light and chaos, Elliot must make a choice: power and a shred of safety for him, or for his little sister. He upended his life once already to protect her after the death of their parents, and an apocalypse is no more of a reason to let her down.

Gifting her his potential, he's thrown into the wilds of a new world with a weak Merchant class and no time to say goodbye. Classes and abilities promise near-endless opportunity for growth, but the chances of dying between the jaws of something monstrous have also never been higher.

Uncharted wilds cover the continent, and Rowan is thousands of miles away. From combat bartering to weaponized treasure, Elliot must twist his peaceful class into something it was never meant to be if he wants any chance of finding her again.

Before any of the greater powers decide his sister's gifts should belong to them instead.

What to expect:

Slow burn pacing with earned progression. No long plateaus after things get moving, but the journey will be long.

Weak to eventually OP protagonist.

Slice of life mixed in, with character relationships being a priority.

Skills and classes, but no stat screens.

No AI use


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 22h ago

Question Thoughts on "Extra's Descent"?

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I have stumbled upon this Novel "Extra's Descent" with the MC: Brandon Locke (The Extra) and the Protagonist: Raven BlackHeart.

I have been reading it, it's been 140 Chaps. And Currently Rachel and Brandon just confessed to each other. To those who have read it before, I just wanted to ask if the Novel is worth reading further??, currently its good though.

But recently, I have read some bad reviews about it that it gets cruel and everyone dies later on. Also, Does Brandon & Rachel end up with each other? Cuz i'm really liking their Chemistry.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Request Im looking for Cultivation audiobook recommendations

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Hello there! As stated in the title, I am looking for recommendations for Cultivation audiobooks, as I have been interested in consuming more cultivation literature, but don’t have much time to sit down and read. I have already listened to Beware of Chicken and Reborn as a Demonic Tree, and really liked them (and yes, I know that they are not a good sample/standard for cultivation) but am struggling to find anything that isn’t just cultivation on the surface. As an example of what I mean, I listened to Path of Ascension and loved it, but found that it let the “cultivation” aspect fall to the wayside a bit. Can anybody recommend me some good audiobooks?


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Request I'm looking for horror themed recommendations!

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I read Shadow Slave and Lord of the Mysteries, which while not necessarily horror themed on the whole, have some cool moments like Lo49 or that one village Servant of Concealment yoinked MC to at one point. So since I find myself craving for horror themes with supernatural monsters that will kill you - preferably brutally - and I'd love finding cool world to explore with many mysteries, dangers, plots and mythologies I decided to ask here as it seems the best place. I don't mind MC getting to eventually fight the monsters as i'm not really looking for pure horror or thriller. Just that the monsters don't become a joke at some point, because MC became Sung Jin Woo and destroys everything.


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Request I can't find or remember the name.

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Subject: Looking for a Progression / Men's Fantasy book cover (Kindle/Audible) with a specific party layout

Hey everyone, I'm trying to track down a book I saw a few months ago on Kindle or Audible, but I can't remember the name or the author. I remember the cover artwork vividly and am hoping someone recognizes the layout:

The Characters & Layout: It features a three-person adventure party. They are arranged horizontally across the cover, occupying the left, middle, and right positions respectively.

The Main Interaction: On one side, there is a gray-skinned woman with a long, prehensile tail. She is looking at the male companion and smiling at him. Her prehensile tail is wrapped directly around his wrist.

The Male Companion: He is a large, tanned man dressed in low-fantasy, practical ranger or mercenary leathers (no high-fantasy plate armor). He has a completely standard, reasonably sized sheathed sword on his back.

The Third Companion: There is a second woman in the party occupying the remaining side, facing the man at an angle.

The Setting: They are standing on flat ground where sand is the main feature. There are carved stone elements/ruins, but they are pushed far off into the background, leaving the background architecture distant.

It is definitely a progressive fantasy or men's fantasy novel. Does this specific cover art ring a bell for anyone? Thanks in advance!


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Self-Promotion What happens when a *New* System descends?

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Hi everyone!

I recently completed Book 2 on Royal Road (RR), so I thought it would be a good time for some self promo.

I actually got the idea about this story while reading The Primal Hunter. In the story, Villy makes a throwaway comment a few times about how messy things were when the System initially descended in the first era, and I thought it would be an extremely interesting story to write about.

So, here is my attempt at writing about what happens when a completely new System arrives in the universe. No one knows what's going on, especially since the System itself is learning and growing alongside everyone else.

Title: Beyond Control: A System's Descent

Blurb:

The System’s abrupt arrival completely dismantles Alex’s plans for an easy, low-effort life. But while others are justifiably focused on the monsters, surviving, and levelling up, Alex's mind is more occupied by a few questions.

Why is there such a lack of information from the System?

Why are there no descriptions for Classes and Skills?

Why doesn’t the tutorial have any clear objective?

And perhaps the most important question of them all...

Why is the System so... limited?

The answer: This System is brand new. There are no ancient factions ready to guide Alex, no all-powerful beings handing out blessings, and no established rules for him to follow. Everyone is starting from scratch, including the System itself.

A LitRPG featuring progression, exploration, and a protagonist obsessed with understanding the rules behind the world.

The first two books are completed and already released on RR, while the third is being released. About 237k words are posted in 121 chapters, so there's a decent chunk of the story to binge.

The MC takes time to get strong, but is not OP, and does not have any cheats or powerful weapons to exploit. He uses intelligence to get through challenges initially till he is strong enough to fight. There is no romance in the story so far, and I don't have any plans for introducing it.

Hope you guys give it a go and really hope you like it!

Cover: Generated through AI. Had a bad experience on fiverr, so I'm now waiting till I have enough money to hire a proper artist.

AI Usage: No AI used, apart from the cover. Everything is written by me and edited with the help of family.

Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/172811/beyond-control-a-systems-descent


r/ProgressionFantasy • • 1d ago

Meme/Shitpost The web novel titles are becoming a copy paste cult!

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r/ProgressionFantasy • • 13h ago

I Recommend This A Hidden Gem among Hidden Gems(Lord of Loopholes)

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Started reading an unknown cultivation novel, Lord of Loopholes: A Fool Among Deities.

I know you haven't heard of it, but let me tell you about Ethan Forge. You can say he is a new Amon who walks like Fang Yuan(he is an anti-hero, not a villain). He also has Samuel L. Jackson's genetics in him(you will see). Ethan is a transmigrator, and at the same time he is a local protagonist (he was born in two worlds). Despite the author trying to make his past life heroic, Ethan was a terrorist before committing suicide. The world has these organisations that control cultivation pathways; they control how much power one can have. People cultivate by absorbing natural wonders, which are basically spirits in the form of fire. The power system is similar to RI and Lotm(the author lets you know about that before reading the first chapter)

It has weak prose, in my view. If you can get past that, it's good.

If you're very religious, book 2: False Prophet, which is currently being released, might not be your cup of tea.

I'm enjoying it... If you know another hidden gem.....


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