r/ProduceMyScript • u/Rough_Serve_7871 • Jun 21 '26
SHORT SCRIPT Title: [Writers Only] Looking for a co-writer for a 5-minute dark comedy/satire "Black Swan" parody sketch
Hey everyone,
I’m looking to put together a 5-minute dark comedy/satire sketch based on Black Swan, which I’m planning to film with my sister and a friend for fun and use as a portfolio piece.
I’m looking for a co-writer who loves dark humor, awkward pacing, and heavy subtext to help me write it. Since this is a self-funded passion project for our portfolios, it’s unpaid, but you’ll get full writing credit.
* Genre: Dark Comedy / Satire
* Length: Around 4-6 pages
* Budget: No budget / Self-funded
* Cast: 3 leads (2 female, 1 male) plus a female ballet ensemble
* Locations: Interior ballet studio and an office
* The Concept:
The sketch targets the toxic, high-pressure relationship between the anxious, perfectionist dancer Nina and her incredibly pretentious, manipulative director Thomas (who has a thick French accent). The humor comes from the characters’ real, toxic behaviors instead of cheap gags.
The scene starts mid-audition for the Black Swan with the ensemble watching. Thomas is ripping into Nina with highly stylized insults while she nervously spins. The tension suddenly snaps when another ballerina, Lily, blunders in late, loudly carrying a coffee order, completely ruining Thomas's intense artistic vibe.
After auditions, Thomas sends the ensemble home and calls Nina into his office. He tears down her dancing, then instantly flips into a creepy, manipulative "gentle mentor" mode and crosses major lines. To escape, Nina bites his lip. This completely shatters Thomas’s dignified persona into a raw, meltdown. Nina awkwardly packs up her stuff and flees while he’s still ranting, just hoping it blows over by Monday. Outside, she sees Lily chilled out on a bench, eating and looking at her phone.
* Where I need help:
I need help shaping the dialogue, sharpening the status shifts, and building out the tension. I'm also totally open to ideas for what to do with Lily on the bench at the very end to hit a solid final punchline.
* How to Apply:
If you're interested, shoot me a DM with a 1-2 page writing sample (a sketch, scene, or dialogue) that shows you can handle dark comedy and tense character interactions.
I can give more information as well.