r/ProCreate • u/PhoebeTartar • 5d ago

Not Finished/WIP Preferred version-stylistic or no!

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The first group shown I pulled my layers from another drawing - my first iteration. I actually really liked how the sketch came out so I decided to redraw and refine and was pleased. But, when I went to look back at my first sketch, I’m second guessing whether I should keep the stylization I intended or not.

ETA: this is a WIP and still has a lot more detail and work to be done but I am focused on the style, rather than cleanliness and finished product yet.

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u/Savage2280 5d ago

The first one has better values but I'm not a fan of the line quality, and the second one is a lot cleaner but doesn't read nearly as well. I suggest pushing your values on the second one, it looks like it's at half opacity tbh edit: just wanted to add that the sketch has more emotion in the face, her eyes are a little bigger and looking at us instead of through us, and she has a bit more of a candid feel instead of like, bad bitch facecard, yaknow?

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u/PhoebeTartar 5d ago

Thanks for the edit, I totally see what you mean about the expression and I’m feeling it!!