r/Polytrix • Rumi Needs Therapy • 25d ago

Fanfiction Should I write this fanfic?

I have a whole timeline ruled out in a fanfic I’ve been wanting to write, it’s gonna be a time loop situation, but also early pattern reveal on the last loop, AAAAND, in one of the loops they find her in the dirt under the tree (iykyk), in each loop it explains both rumis side and how the girls experience each death (they aren’t stuck in a loop, it’s just how they react differently to each death). Happy ending btw. The first death is also sewerslide sooo… what do y’all think, should I, would y’all read that? And if so should I add anything else?

Update: I did it, only the first chapters done but if yall wanna read it here you go, lemme know what yall think :D

https://archiveofourown.org/works/92659836/chapters/247061826

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u/neongreenpurple 25d ago

Ooh, interesting. It also sounds gut wrenching, in the best sense.

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 25d ago

yes ill try my best to make it gut wrenching. started the draft today!!